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Title: Chapter 20: A Momentary Interlude 03 Dec 2009 4:53 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no!!! It sounds like the plan backfired! Why are they both being so stubborn.

    ooh, hurry up and update. I really wqant to see if they'll get back together.

    Author's Response:

    Stubborness seems to run rampant in Britons, doesn't it? Especially magical ones. I hope I updated quickly enough for you.

    Thanks for reading and reviewing! I am glad you enjoyed it!

Title: Chapter 20: A Momentary Interlude 02 Dec 2009 10:43 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder what is keeping Lily in GB...

    Author's Response:

    Her job, for one. That, and her stubbornness.

    Thanks for reading and reviewing! I am glad you enjoyed it!

Title: Chapter 19: Decisions, Part 2 11 Nov 2009 1:38 am
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    While I like this story a lot you've got me confused now! Why would Lily even consider going on anything with Potter after learning that she has several potions and curses put on her person most likely by said man?????????? And why would Severus support that???? Shouldn't he worry about Lily being coerced into even more traps by James??? And made to drink even more manipluating potions????
    It's jsut as well that the boys took matters in their hands and made Potter show his true face - but I still don't get it!
    Anyway: nice story and I'm really looking forward to you next chapter(s)!

    Author's Response:

    Okay... it looks like it is time for some answers.

    1. Why would Lily consider going on anything with Potter after learning that she has several potions and curses put on her, most likely by said man? 
    She is still under the influence of the potions, so she still has "feelings" for James. While she is under the influence of potions and spells, they wouldn't create such strong emotions from nothing. They simply magnify the feelings and emotions already there.

    2. Why would Severus support that?
    Two reasons:  he knows the boys hate James Potter, so having him go along on the zoo trip serves as punishment for them. The other reason is that having Potter go in his place gives Severus time to brood a bit, and to brew the nullifier potion.

    3. Shouldn't [Severus] be worried about Lily being coerced into even more traps by James? And made to drink even more manipulating potions?
    Well, first of all, James doesn't know that he has been found out yet, so he isn't suspicious. IMHO, he wouldn't have any reason to think he needed to add more manipulative measures to what he has already done. However, even if he had slipped in more potions for Lily to consume, Severus is back 'home' brewing a Nullifier Potion, which would nullify any old or new potions in Lily's (or anyone who drinks it's) system. Problem solved.

Title: Chapter 19: Decisions, Part 2 10 Nov 2009 9:49 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    haha, thumbs up, boys!

    Author's Response: *thumbs up* Thanks, LS!
Title: Chapter 19: Decisions, Part 2 10 Nov 2009 12:45 pm
Reviewer: -NightRise- (Signed) [Report This]
    yay to Dudley!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks, NightRise!
Title: Chapter 19: Decisions, Part 2 10 Nov 2009 5:12 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg!! That was too funny when the glass disappeared.

    I hope that the boys don't get into too much trouble though.
    I can't wait to see what happens next.

    I hope that now that Lily has seen what James' true intentions are, that she''ll give Sev a chance!!

    Nice work, can't wait for the reunion!

    Author's Response:

    Reunion: Coming Soon to a Computer Near You! I am working on the next chapter, "A Momentary Interlude", at the moment, and hope to have it up this weekend.

    Thanks, Dawn, for always reviewing so kindly!

Title: Chapter 19: Decisions, Part 2 10 Nov 2009 2:59 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Bravo! Wonderful "end of summer trip" that included the Snake! at the zoo! :-) Consider this a standing ovation!

    V.

    Author's Response: Thanks, Mervoparkite!
Title: Chapter 18: Decisions Part 1 08 Nov 2009 5:50 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, too cute. And it starts.

    Lily is very sneaky thinking up this plan. She should have been a Slytherin.

    I love how the boys worked together and switched places and all that.

    Nice work Kyle, but you left us with another sort of cliffie!!

    Author's Response:

    I try to incorporate cuteness into almost everything I write, and this crossover gave me plenty of chances for it. As to Lily's House, I believe that some people could do well in multiple Houses, and with this Lily, I definately believe she would have had to argue with the Hat to avoid Slytherin, just like Harry had to in canon. As to the boys working together, the plan needed them both to put in hard work to pull it off, and pull it off they did, with flair at that! Sorry about the cliffie, though. I'm just evil like that.

    Thanks for reading and reviewing! I am glad you enjoyed it!

Title: Chapter 18: Decisions Part 1 08 Nov 2009 4:58 am
Reviewer: min (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was good. Don't get them together too fast. All the angst makes it fun to read.

    Author's Response: I won't be getting them together that quick. However, the seeds of doubt regarding her relationship with James have definately sprouted in Lily's mind. There will be a few more chappies before this story is done, and there will be a sequel down the road. I promise!
Title: Chapter 17: The Talk... 15 Oct 2009 12:07 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    It took a lot to make Lily love James. Hahaha. I just imagine his growing frustration - one love potion - nothing - second one - nothing- third - dammit! Still nothing.... Lol.

    Author's Response:

    It's Lily's strong will that kept them from working. Think of a love potion as a liquid form of the Imperius Curse with an order incorporated into it already. If the person who consumes the potion has a strong enough will, they can resist the potion. Thus, the Queen of Stubbornness and Strong Will would be able to resist even the strongest of love potions.

    Thanks for reading and reviewing! I am glad you enjoyed it!


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