Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 11 23 Aug 2009 2:09 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    OOh, things are really heating up, aren't they? I can't wait till they meet.

    Great chappie Kyle, on to the next.
Title: Chapter 10 22 Aug 2009 10:09 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha, Old Dad Snape pulled himself together quite quickly :) m.

    Author's Response: Well, an Ennervate will pull you right together. However, he will be seen ranting to himself in a soliliquary in chapter 12.
Title: Chapter 10 22 Aug 2009 5:54 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Good, except for calling Petunia Lily, which made that first section a bit confusing...

    Author's Response: Actually, I called Alice Lily. I have fixed it.
Title: Chapter 10 21 Aug 2009 10:20 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I loved that crack about the cheese!! That's a good one. :)

    Now, I'm anxious for the next one to see what happens with (in a snobby fake voice) "Lord Potter".

    Nice chappie Kyle, and glad to see you've had access to a computer!

    Author's Response: For this chapter, it was just using the library's computer. However, I have temporary access to my laptop, and am working on chapters 11 and 12! However, you won't be seeing snippets of the date until chapter 13... Sorry, Dawn!
Title: Chapter 09: Decisions 09 Aug 2009 8:26 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooooh! Sev fainted! Poor man! So is it a good or bad idea to tell the "father" first in this instance? I like the "flip" in parent rolls as you've been doing here--Sev is certainly sneaky enough to "get back" Lilly once they are in England.

    Looking forward to your next update.

    V.

    Author's Response: Seeing as Lily is the one being wooed in this story, I figured it would have to be Severus going to England to get the boys switched back and everything straightened out.
Title: Chapter 09: Decisions 09 Aug 2009 8:26 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooooh! Sev fainted! Poor man! So is it a good or bad idea to tell the "father" first in this instance? I like the "flip" in parent rolls as you've been doing here--Sev is certainly sneaky enough to "get back" Lilly once they are in England.

    Looking forward to your next update.

    V.

    Author's Response: Duplicated reviews??? Thanks again for reviewing though, Mervoparkite... I am glad to have people who are kind enough to give me feedback...
Title: Chapter 09: Decisions 08 Aug 2009 10:24 am
Reviewer: Princess_Arica_of_Rivendelll (Signed) [Report This]
    PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON.

    Author's Response: I am working on a new chappie right now, but it might be a little while before I can post it... I am stuck using a library computer for the time being, and am limited to one hour per day, which seems to be devoted to getting my emails and reviews read and responded to. Thank you for reading and reviewing, and if you like this, you might like my other stories available at http://www.fanfiction.net/~phoenix1001 or at http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Harry_Potter2007
Title: Chapter 09: Decisions 08 Aug 2009 10:23 am
Reviewer: Princess_Arica_of_Rivendelll (Signed) [Report This]
    PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON.

    Author's Response: I will try.
Title: Chapter 09: Decisions 05 Aug 2009 7:31 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! They had better go over there fast before James convinces Lily to do something really crazy . . .like marry him.

    Poor Severus, such a shock!

    Author's Response: Remember the 1998 version of the Parent Trap movie with the b!tc4y step-mother to be? Well, James will be nicer than her by far, but it is not going to happen that way... but there are interesting things in the works involving James... It is fun making Severus faint, or any Snape for that matter! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Title: Chapter 8 05 Aug 2009 7:28 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    That was sweet and funny, especially with the underwear. I never thought about boys arguing over underwear before, probably because I only have one brother and he got whatever clothes he wanted. My sisters on the other hand could start a war over make-up and hairstyles.

    I can't wait to see what happens with James. And I hope that Lily eventually forgives Sev.

    Author's Response: Well, when boys are regularly teased in situations where their underwear is visible (gym locker rooms, group camping, summer camps, boarding school, etc), and Harry is trying to get William into something (ie boxers and wife-beaters) that won't get him teased at Hogwarts. It is like you said about the make-up, except a bit more... manly. I hope to have a new chapter up soon, and you will find out what happens with James, Lily, Sev, and the boys.

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