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Title: Chapter 09: Decisions 05 Aug 2009 10:16 am
Reviewer: gin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i love your story.but snape and lily not great parents for me.because why snape never saw harry and lily never saw william? and why they dont talk about another child who dont stay with them?i mean william and harry dont know each others.
    and i dont like james too.please update soon

    Author's Response: If you haven't seen the Parent Trap (1998 version), go see it. The parents there never mentioned the other child, and that is the basis of the crossover here... Harry Potter characters in a Parent Trap situation, with magic... Thanks for R&Ring, Gin, and please, email me off list at kyscco15@att.net, so I can respond directly to you about your reviews...
Title: Chapter 09: Decisions 05 Aug 2009 1:02 am
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Mean cliffie!
    Poor Severus, that come as a shock!
    What the hell is Potter up to? Sounds not good at all! I hope the twins will get Lilly back on track to her husband!
    When will she get to know the truth?

    Author's Response: Lily finding out will come up soon... Sorry about the cliffie... you might have a bit of a wait for the next chapter, depending on whether I can get to a library or campus computer. I am losing my own tomorrow due to lack of work.
Title: Chapter 09: Decisions 04 Aug 2009 7:22 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, that was blunt. Poor Severus!

    Author's Response: Sometimes the best route is the direct one.
Title: Chapter 09: Decisions 04 Aug 2009 6:33 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    OmG!! Kyle, I order you to start writing again, right now, young man!!!

    Leaving us on a cliffie like that. How could you!!!

    I loved it though, and I can 't wait to see Snape and Lily's reaction to seeing each other again.

    Author's Response: I can start writing right now, but as of tomorrow, I will no longer have access to a computer at my fingertips. You know I lost my job, right? Well, my gramma is taking over my laptop payments, and holding it hostage until I get a new job and pay her back. So my posting of stories and to the group will be whenever I can use a campus or library computer.
Title: Chapter 09: Decisions 04 Aug 2009 4:51 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha, a lovely blunt boy he is! Loved it!

    Author's Response: Yes, well, I can see Harry as always being blunt.
Title: Chapter 09: Decisions 04 Aug 2009 4:26 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    I enjoyed this chapter, but not a big fan of the cliffhanger.

    Author's Response: The wait for the next chapter may be a bit longer... my computer is going out-of-reach for a while
Title: Chapter 8 25 Jul 2009 3:47 am
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I stumbled over this story today and like it quite a lot, though I'm from Germany and very well versed in the original storyline that you happen to copy quite a lot from - not that I mind... "Das doppelte Lottchen" is the original title in German and though it's to girls in that case your plot seems to develope quite a bit like it. But one question: Why did you put Snape into Amish county? I can't for the life of me see him there, even though he needed to get away from everything, the Amish aren't a concept of living I could ever imagine for him! Maybe you could explain your reasoning (i. e. Snape's) a bit more in the story?

    Author's Response: I placed Snape in Amish country, because I can't see him really being open to living in modern Muggle areas, and he wanted to get away from the Wizarding world for a while. I see him as living in the Amish area without being Amish himself.
Title: Chapter 7 14 Jul 2009 5:10 am
Reviewer: redmal (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good story. I loved the original parent trap. I would note that you have the boys born before they got married if their 11th birthday comes before their 11th anniversary. You may want to change it to 12th anniversary in this chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out. I will change it when I go to beta the story.
Title: Chapter 8 13 Jul 2009 10:50 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol for the underwear part :) A nice chapter! Mila

    Author's Response: A nice review! Thanks, little-sun!
Title: Chapter 8 13 Jul 2009 7:57 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I am so glad that you've updated. That was hilarious about boxers vs. briefs. Too funny!

    I hope that if both William and Harry go to Hogwarts, that Sev and Lily will be forced to confront each other.

    I'm looking forward to the next chappie. Great job as usual Kyle! :)

    Author's Response: Obviously. they will be confronting each other before then...

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