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Title: Chapter 7 20 Jun 2009 2:47 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter. I'm surprised Snape was so forward about Lily, but it does seem clear that he misses her. I can't wait to read more!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, PG! I hope that I am meeting your expectations for this challenge! (Thanks to Tabitha for doping me into... I mean, convincing me... to write a story for the Challenge Fest...) How I see it, is that "William" (Harry) just sorta caught Snape by surprise, and in a moment of grief, because it was Snape and Lily's wedding anniversary remember, Snape just got caught up in the memories and was more... thinking aloud than conciously replying.
Title: Chapter 7 18 Jun 2009 6:15 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter, but very short.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I am sorry the chapters are so short, but the ones written and posted already were written at work on my lunch breaks. I am now out of work (hopefully short-term only) and have more time to dedicate to my writing. Enjoy the new chapter which will be up this week.
Title: Chapter 7 18 Jun 2009 5:27 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    So they're eleven. For some reason, I thought that they were older.

    I'm so glad that you've updated Kyle. I'm so looking forward to when they all meet. Now, THAT'S going to be fireworks! :)

    Author's Response: in the prologue it stated that Sev and Lily dropped off their 10-year-old sons, and their b-days were in july during camp
Title: Chapter 7 18 Jun 2009 2:32 pm
Reviewer: gin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    snape doesnt talk about other child,harry.why? he doesnt know about harry or he doesnt want to him.

    Author's Response: Severus knows about both of his children (they are twins after all. It just hurts him to not be able to see both of his sons all the time.
Title: Chapter 6 26 May 2009 4:13 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good chapter! Can't wait to see what else they get up to! It should be fun! I'd love to see Harry milk a cow! Or ride a horse.

    Author's Response: They may be in Amish country, but the Snape home is not a farm.
Title: Chapter 6 25 May 2009 2:26 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    So It's "MOM" being courted in this version of the story--not "DAD" as in the original--and James! no less. Just how much of a Prat will he be? Will he really want "Harry" out of the way because he is Sev's son? Will Siri and Remus make an appearance as well?

    V.

    Author's Response: Yes, it is Lily being courted in this version. And yes, by James. He isn't being much of a prat, if at all. He truly likes kids, although he has not interacted with Harry much, because of camp and all. I am not sure if James will have a problem with Harry being Snapes son, or if Siri and Remus will make an apperance. Call my Muses... they are vacationing in Palau right now.
Title: Chapter 6 25 May 2009 9:10 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, James on the scene :) Mila

    Author's Response: Yep. I earned my bonus points, by bringing James into the story. (Hey! I need to write to Ponytail Goddess and bring this up to her!)
Title: Chapter 6 25 May 2009 7:43 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, you put James in it!!! Oh, I'm so excited--update soon, por favor!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Do I get my bonus points?
Title: Chapter 6 25 May 2009 6:43 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, I'm so glad that you've updated! This should be really interesting. I think that Harry almost gave himself away the way he went overboard with Sev! Too cute.

    Hmm....James Potter? One and the same? What part does HE play in this?

    Author's Response: he didn't go anymore overboard than Annie James did in the movies when she was being all prim and proper, and when she burst out in french...
Title: Chapter 5 22 May 2009 7:52 am
Reviewer: me (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is cute!

    Author's Response: Thank you.

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