Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 5 22 May 2009 4:08 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the Parent trap (the original) you seem to be doing a good job of keeping the spirit of the story.

    Looking forward to trouble "brewing."

    V.

    Author's Response: Thank you, Merv. (Is your name based off of the Mervs from PT?)
Title: Chapter 5 21 May 2009 9:50 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    ...and the plot thickens! I imagine both boys are going to have quite a difficult time impersonating the other. One bit of information that might help is that the Amish are referred to as Mennonites when talking about their religious denomination. You mentioned that William was a Roman Catholic, so I thought you might want to know that Harry would be considered an Amish Mennonite.

    I do hope you update soon because I can't wait to see what the boys get up to and what their parents' reactions will be to their new behaviors. I especially wonder if Severus, ex-spy extraordinaire, will notice rather soon. After all, he could always legilimize William.

    I can't wait for more!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: They are switching places, so when they are saying one is Amish (Mennonite) and the other Roman Catholic, it officially means the other is that. William is Amish and Harry is Catholic, but they have to play act the other.
Title: Chapter 4 21 May 2009 9:23 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol, nice final paragraph. I really like reading witty last paragraphs. Anyways, this is great! I kind of wish you had included a bit of the twin's training though because it might have been funny to see what they tried to teach them (I imagine they might lie a bit too and prank this new set of twins, lol).

    I'm excited to find out what Will and Harry are going to do to try and prepare themselves for the ol' switcharoo.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Sorry about not responding to this sooner, PG! You know what they did for the switcharoo. I may write a side-story sometime about their training... just an idea. Should I list it as a response to the challenge on P&S?
Title: Chapter 5 21 May 2009 5:35 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw c'mon. Why'd you have to end it there!!! Please update soon. I really am dying to see what happens.

    This should be great. Is Sev all serious and stern in this like in Canon? I'd love to see Harry Evans prank him ! LOL! Ooh, will Harry be as good as potions though, since he grew up with Lily? Sev might notice the difference, if he's not.

    Author's Response: Harry is going to be good at potions, because he has been taught about magical stuff since he could walk and talk. He has had a chance to learn about brewing from a young age, and he learns about ingredients and plants from Prof. Sprout and from reading with and hanging around with Neville.
Title: Chapter 4 21 May 2009 5:30 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    OOh, I bet I know. Do I get a cookie if I guess right?

    I loved the Parent Trap, and this story promises to be as interesting! Harry and William . I just love the names. Okay, so Lily has to change her name to Diana, and Sev, Charles? Okay forget it! Just a thought !

    LOL! Great work Kyle. I can't wait to see what trouble George and Fred will get Harry and William into. This should be fun.

    Author's Response: That could be their faux identity for Muggle IDs. Here's a tin of my Grandma's home-made cookies, for guessing at what was to happen. And you won't see any of the trouble that Gred and Feorge get Hilliam and Warry into until I get enough ideas for a side-story.
Title: Chapter 3 20 May 2009 5:39 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Very fun! I adore the Parent Trap movies!

    Author's Response: Thanks. Enjoy!
Title: Prologue 17 May 2009 6:28 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    This looks like it might become very interesting. Lily and Sev are both alive, the Voldy thing is dead, there are twins, and they're about to meet up at camp? Cool! Can't wait to go on.

    Author's Response: Yep. I think it will be interesting. Thanks to you for the encouragement. Also, thanks must go to Ponytail Goddess for giving me the prompt for the story.
Title: Chapter 3 17 May 2009 5:35 am
Reviewer: strangergirl86 (Signed) [Report This]
    Cute story. I love how Harry and William are not enemies at camp. I like it and cannot wait to see more. Thanks.

    Author's Response: Thanks. Enjoy the story.
Title: Chapter 3 17 May 2009 4:53 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoops! Well, I guess now they know they are brothers. Poor William! Can't wait for the next part!

    Author's Response: Well, William did have to find out the hard way that the father he respected so much had not told him he had a brother, a twin at that. I think that that would be almost unforgivable, especially since he was forced to grow up as an only child. Harry, on the other hand, had Dudley, Neville, and the Weasleys to play with, while William had no one.
Title: Chapter 2 17 May 2009 4:50 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Looks like the two of them will be fighting before they're getting along, huh? And when will they switch places? Good job so far!

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