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Reviews For Harry Potter's Parent Trap
Author's Response: Yep. They are in two different cabins... I thought it would be funny to confuse Flitwick at supper... and it seemed well-liked.
I did notice that there was a small typo. You wrote She had sent her son, Harry, off to Norris Lake Quidditch Camp in the US for the next eight weeks. Not for the first time in the last ten years, her thoughts turned to her other son, Harry, and her ex-husband, Severus Snape. Shouldn't it be "her other son--William"? Since she has Harry, right? Author's Response: Thank you for pointing that out. I will correct it ASAP!
Will Draco show up? Sorry - I submitted without a score. Author's Response: Draco will show up soon, but I am not sure when yet. Probably at Diagon in Mme Malkins. And if you read through chapter nine, you see another Snape fainting!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing.
This is great, I can't wait to read more. Author's Response: Thanks, Dawn! I appreciate you always R&'ing. I hope to have a new chapter up soon, but no promises on the time frame...
So I'm assuming that both Harry and William have similar scars from Voldie? I can't wait to see the pranks they have up their sleeves.
In any case, I love it. So funny.
This is your second story, right? When I saw the summary, I was really anxious to read it. First, because YOUR'RE writing it, and secondly, because it's sounds like it's going to be hilarious. Can't wait to read the next chapter. I'm glad to see that you're going to make this longer, because based on the first chapter, it's going to be great! :) Author's Response: "...I was really anxious to read it. First, because YOUR'RE writing it..." Dawn, you have a little brown on your nose, dear... Thanks for reading and reviewing my stories. I am grateful for loyal supporters like you.
Author's Response: Yep, it was Severus. WIlliam had Lily, and HArry had Severus.
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