Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 17 May 2009 4:48 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I like Charlie being a counselor and Flitwick too. It's funny how they noticed the fact that the boys are twins before they did themselves. I take it they're in different cabins?

    Author's Response: Yep. They are in two different cabins... I thought it would be funny to confuse Flitwick at supper... and it seemed well-liked.
Title: Prologue 17 May 2009 4:44 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting start here, it's funny to think of Severus living among the Amish though.

    I did notice that there was a small typo. You wrote She had sent her son, Harry, off to Norris Lake Quidditch Camp in the US for the next eight weeks. Not for the first time in the last ten years, her thoughts turned to her other son, Harry, and her ex-husband, Severus Snape.

    Shouldn't it be "her other son--William"? Since she has Harry, right?

    Author's Response: Thank you for pointing that out. I will correct it ASAP!
Title: Chapter 3 17 May 2009 1:26 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    This great - but I can't see a Snape fainting.

    Will Draco show up?

    Sorry - I submitted without a score.

    Author's Response: Draco will show up soon, but I am not sure when yet. Probably at Diagon in Mme Malkins. And if you read through chapter nine, you see another Snape fainting!
Title: Chapter 3 17 May 2009 1:25 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    This great - but I can't see a Snape fainting.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Title: Chapter 3 16 May 2009 5:03 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow, what a shock for the boys. Aw c'mon hurry up and update, you've left us on a cliffie!

    This is great, I can't wait to read more.

    Author's Response: Thanks, Dawn! I appreciate you always R&'ing. I hope to have a new chapter up soon, but no promises on the time frame...
Title: Chapter 2 16 May 2009 4:59 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Now I know why I thought this was written by Ponytail Goddess, because it was her challenge. Awesome PG! I love it, and Kyle, you are doing a great job.

    So I'm assuming that both Harry and William have similar scars from Voldie? I can't wait to see the pranks they have up their sleeves.
Title: Chapter 1 16 May 2009 4:53 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm sorry. I'm half asleep. I thought that you were someone else! But heh Kyle, it's Dawn. Welcome to P & S. Have you written anything else here? I don't think so, but this story is great. Is this your first attempt at fanfiction, or do you write somewhere else.

    In any case, I love it. So funny.
Title: Prologue 16 May 2009 4:51 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    William and Harry? Too funny. Two little Princes. Just perfect.

    This is your second story, right? When I saw the summary, I was really anxious to read it. First, because YOUR'RE writing it, and secondly, because it's sounds like it's going to be hilarious. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

    I'm glad to see that you're going to make this longer, because based on the first chapter, it's going to be great! :)

    Author's Response: "...I was really anxious to read it. First, because YOUR'RE writing it..." Dawn, you have a little brown on your nose, dear... Thanks for reading and reviewing my stories. I am grateful for loyal supporters like you.
Title: Chapter 3 16 May 2009 8:47 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I bet there was Severus in the locket! I hope you will update soon, Mila

    Author's Response: Yep, it was Severus. WIlliam had Lily, and HArry had Severus.
Title: Chapter 2 16 May 2009 8:44 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha, I like the difference in their behaviour. Miniaturised Snape scowl - haha. I really like this story. Mila

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