Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 16 May 2009 8:41 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw! I am so glad Longbottoms are alive too! Mila
Title: Prologue 16 May 2009 8:34 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha, it reminds me of the book about the girltwins in the same situation (senza magic) sent to a summer camp. Lovely to be reminded of that wonderful book! I am curious if the boys are looking just the same and if they switch after getting back from the camp :) Mila

    Author's Response: Yep. It is following the basic plot of the Parent Trap (1998 version of the movie) with some minor, yet obvious, changes. Please, continue to read and review, and thanks!
Title: Chapter 3 16 May 2009 8:27 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OK, I am hooked. Loved the parent trap and you have an easy writing style. Can't wait for next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Title: Chapter 3 16 May 2009 8:14 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Mwahahaha! Oh, I love this mayhem! So far, you've done a very good job! I like the characters and their similarities and quirks. I can't wait to see what happens next!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thanks, PG! It is a high compliment to have you, the Challenger, give me such high praise on my work! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Title: Chapter 2 16 May 2009 8:10 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm surprised Harry and William didn't react a bit more to their similarities. Surely they noticed them, but I suppose they were more concerned with the awkward attention it got them with their friends. I bet they're secretly freaked out about it though.

    -P.G.
Title: Chapter 1 16 May 2009 8:06 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol, I can't wait for them to meet!

    -P.G.
Title: Prologue 16 May 2009 7:58 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    You have no idea how happy you have made me by answering my challenge, Phoenix! The Amish idea is cool! I take it Severus is living their lifestyle? He would be used to old-fashioned living, so it makes sense.

    I can't wait to see what the boys get up to at Quidditch Camp! My one small critique of this chapter is that in this sentence: "Not for the first time in the last ten years, her thoughts turned to her other son, Harry, and her ex-husband, Severus Snape," you wrote Harry's name instead of William's. It's an easy correction to make though and the sentence is in the second to last paragraph if you want to correct it.

    Nice work!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out, PG. Our EDQ convinced me to change which boy stayed with which parent after I wrote the prologue, and I missed that spot when I changed it around...

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