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Reviews For Harry Potter's Parent Trap
Author's Response: Yep. It is following the basic plot of the Parent Trap (1998 version of the movie) with some minor, yet obvious, changes. Please, continue to read and review, and thanks!
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-P.G. Author's Response: Thanks, PG! It is a high compliment to have you, the Challenger, give me such high praise on my work! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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I can't wait to see what the boys get up to at Quidditch Camp! My one small critique of this chapter is that in this sentence: "Not for the first time in the last ten years, her thoughts turned to her other son, Harry, and her ex-husband, Severus Snape," you wrote Harry's name instead of William's. It's an easy correction to make though and the sentence is in the second to last paragraph if you want to correct it. Nice work! -P.G. Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out, PG. Our EDQ convinced me to change which boy stayed with which parent after I wrote the prologue, and I missed that spot when I changed it around... |
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