I loved the folklore, setting, and whole experience that Severus and Sarai are having. Terrific chapter!
| Title: Baba Yaga's Bargain
| 18 Mar 2011 4:21 am
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Absolutely fascinating-- as always!!!
Loved your portrayal of Baba Yaga in this chapter. Nicely writ, as always - I look forward to the next chapter.
| Title: Baba Yaga's Bargain
| 07 Mar 2011 12:26 am
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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Absolutely beautiful! I loved the story of baba yaga and how she is going to help them. The descriptions of her house and weapon care are also great! Hope you have a great vacation!
| Title: Baba Yaga's Bargain
| 06 Mar 2011 11:25 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Jarillion is soon going to wish he'd never interfered with Snape's family.
I like how you are able to adapt and incorporate various myths into your stories.
| Title: Baba Yaga's Bargain
| 02 Mar 2011 7:35 pm
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| Reviewer: badgerlady (Anonymous)
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I'm sorry to say that the farther you get from the HP world, the less interesting I find this story. A pastiche of every known fantasy tradition doesn't make for a coherent narrative or engaging character development. Just one person's opinion, of course, but I did enjoy your earlier writing and keep hoping you'll get back to developing the family dynamic in the context of the HP universe that you established so well at the beginning.
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