This was wonderfully done. Justice was served, indeed. It felt fitting. Thank you for that.
| Title: The Queens' Judgment
| 13 May 2011 11:35 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Hee! Jarillion on a LEASH! Just where he belongs! This was an incredibly powerful chapter-- LOTS of stuff going on throughout, but extremely readable nonetheless. I WAS going to ask about the exileds' magic, but you answered that at the last second, so I'll just chuckle once more at both Harry & Sev having to be restrained from inflicting some serious damage on the accused(s). Excellent job!
| Title: The Queens' Judgment
| 23 Apr 2011 10:24 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Well, that should make anyone thinking of evil doing under the Queens' jurisdiction think twice for a century or so!
Ooh I had 2 chapters to read, not sure if you put them up together or I missed the alert lol, anyways the last chapter was fantastic with the battle, im glad that Nesmay didnt kill Jarillion and taint herself, this chapter was very good too, its amazing how the fae will dole out the right punishment even to family members! they all deserved what they got :)
I hope Draco and harry feel better eventually and stop having headaches!
I'm glad that justice was served! Can't wait for more :))
| Title: The Queens' Judgment
| 22 Apr 2011 5:34 am
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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Great job! I loved that you didn't kill the traitors, but allowed the possibility that they learn better, and the losses they suffered were just. Though sending the fae to mortal realm was a bit dangerous. Even without their magic, won't they be able to cause more hurt?
| Title: The Queens' Judgment
| 22 Apr 2011 2:09 am
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Errors? I noticed no errors. And Happy Birthday, btw. Kudos on two wonderful chapters.
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