Title: The Runespoor's Hatchlings
| 28 Nov 2022 4:09 pm
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I’m really enjoying the sibling dynamics between the three children. The new hatchlings are an adorable addition to the Manor grounds. I hope that Nesmay starts calling Severus and Sarai, mum and dad soon! It may be easier for her, as she’s never known her parents.
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Title: The Runespoor's Hatchlings
| 10 Sep 2011 11:22 pm
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Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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It made sense for Draco to call Sarai Mum, but would feel forced if Harry copied straight away. Maybe later. Seems rushed for Nesmay too, especially as she knows Sarai well by her given name. On the other hand she seems desperate to feel truly part of the family. Well done the runespoor! Names? Selina, Siril, Sorcha
Awesome chapter! I really hope that Harry begins to call Sarai Mum soon and the same for Nesmay! That will make them seem like a real family... It will complete it, I think.
As for names... Hmmm... Rowan, Rosisia, Reynilda, Remfrey
Saethryth, Sunniva, Saer
I actually just found those names by researching medieval names... And they looked and sounded cool lol.
Great job, again, on this chapter=)
Title: The Runespoor's Hatchlings
| 10 Sep 2011 5:45 am
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Reviewer: Romanticide (Anonymous)
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I think HArry and Nesmay should just leave it the way it is. As for the names of the hatchlings: Rowan Roshan Rosario
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