Oh that was pure evil. Not entirely unexpected, but tragic beyond words.
| Title: New Arrivals
| 29 Aug 2014 4:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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aww. Im sorry but I really didnt like the ending...:S
That was just too cruel, although admittedly things had been getting a bit too cosy and comfortable for the Snapes and I'd been wondering how you were going to be able to bring something less idyllic into the story.
| Title: New Arrivals
| 24 Oct 2011 5:52 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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This was an excellent chapter, though very sad. Unfortunately, bad things happen to good people, and tragedy and death is a part of life. While it wasn't fair for the Unseelie Queen to kill the Snapes' baby, no one ever said life was fair.
One can hope that the family draws closer during this time of sorrow and maybe even discovers what really happened, though I don't think that likely, since the death was meant to look like natural causes and no one is the wiser.
Very relaistically done, I cried.
Well that most definitely SUCKED!!!!! And I was enjoying this story, hmph, not any more!!!!!
AWWWW!!!
Let Titania find the Seelie spy and gut him/her like a fish.
Poor Severus...he just can't catch a break, he will just have to pour all his love into his baby girl.
The chapter was riveting, but the suspense is unbearable.
You know.. This was a good chapter. But I'm kinda upset about the ending. :( still you did an excellent job.
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