I can feel the family’s grief.
A sad and wonderful chapter. Poor baby Alexander..as Sev said he never had a chance to live. I want to do something so evil to Maeve.
| Title: Darkest Before Dawn
| 31 Oct 2011 5:22 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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You've not lost your touch in writing a tearjerker of a chapter!
I must say that as awfully sad as this chapter was it was very well written, I was literally welling up with tears the whole way through, to go through such a horrible thing seems beyond comprehension for me, a mothers worst nightmare to be sure, I hope she can come through her grief eventually :(
| Title: Darkest Before Dawn
| 30 Oct 2011 8:17 am
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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No, life isn't fair, much as we might wish it. My great-grandparents hang on by a thread, as does my great uncle. I think only their stubborness keeps them alive now. And like as not, I will lose my grandma and mother someday. I offer my condolences, and pray that there is light in your life to help you keep going.
Good chapter... Though it Sarai dies I think I'll simply be devastated. She has to live for her othe children. While it is a terrible loss, there are still four other children and a husband who need her... Ahh!
Still, it was a good chapter:)
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