Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Den of Vipers 05 Jun 2009 4:16 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Go Sev--tell those snakes that they have to change for the better. I really liked that part. And poor Draco, forced to deal with Pansy and the nasty Slytherins.

    I loved the part with Hermione and Draco, that was great. When he was looking at her . . .ooh boy! LOL!

    I hope Severus discovers who made those two cauldrons explode, i think it was deliberate. I really felt bad for Harry when he was trying to get Severus out of the lab. But Draco was right, Harry had to get out before Severus could concentrate properly and not worry about his son.

    Good for Phil for saving Severus!

    Author's Response: Yeah that was rough!  So true! Phil is a handy guy to have around in a pinch!
Title: Den of Vipers 05 Jun 2009 4:16 am
Reviewer: Sukisho816 (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for the update ^^

    Can't wait till Philip(sp?) reveals himself.

    Author's Response:

    You're welcome and I've updated!

    Philip won;t reveal himself for a bit more yet.  It's not time.

Title: Den of Vipers 05 Jun 2009 4:13 am
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Philip must have been in a real rush to have let down his veils. But then... if it's family... the man can act like an idiot. I am greatly pleased with your portrayal of him and it's very subtle so that it doesn't distract from the original story.

    The interaction between each character was interesting to say the least. It is believable that certain characters would be prejudiced and set in their beliefs because it's a common trait in humans. Draco, in particular, was fun to read, especially with his struggling to hide his crush from Hermione. I hope things work out between them...

    Severus.. that great idiot is going to get himself killed! Thankfully, a vampire saved his life. However, Severus must have been really out of it not to notice a man taller than he is supporting him. I hope Madame Pomfrey forces him to stay in bed until he's healthy! She scares me more than Severus does...

    Don't look at me like that, Severus!

    Well, I think I'm going to end this review now. I'm tired. I hate school. I think I'm going to go to bed. Good night my dear.

    Update soon.

    Your loyal and tormented reviewer,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, he sure can, like another Snape I could name. 

    Things SHOULD work out between them and I'm glad you like the way they're interacting

    Yeah, well Sev was trying to protect his students and Harry, and he was very sick from the fumes when Phil was holding him, so that's why he didn;t notice him.  Pomfrey will keep a good eye on her two most frequently injured patients.  And all healers are scary when roused, LOL!

    Sev agrees with you . . .he just doesn;t like to admit it!

    Night, Jewels! Pleasant dreams!

Title: Den of Vipers 05 Jun 2009 3:44 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh too funny. Pansy is hanging off of Draco. Poor guy OMG, I almost peed my pants when Draco was admiring Hermione's butt.

    Ooh, please update soon, that was great.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah wasn't that hilarious.  I thought of my nephew . . .who's 17 when I wrote that, cause that's what he does to his girlfriend, LOL!

    And as you know, I've just updated!  Poor Draco though, pursued by Miss Pitbull!

Title: Den of Vipers 05 Jun 2009 3:28 am
Reviewer: dazzlingd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wonderful update!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much and I've updated again! Go and see Harry and Sev's heart to heart talk in the Hospital Wing!

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