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Title: Ambushed! 19 Jun 2009 11:06 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    well done harry for telling percy on where to get of, how dare he try and tell harry that he isn't worthy of the weasleys friendship, i would like to slap him myself the jumped up arrogant git.

    well i wasn't expecting them as the culprits that blew up the cauldron, philip is certainly quite scary for a vampire, even a nice one.

    harry and katie i think would make a good couple

    Author's Response:

    me too! Me too! He deserves it!

    Those three are certainly regretting their actions now and yes, Phillip does ave his scary side. 

    I like those two together, they just seem to fit nicely.

Title: Ambushed! 19 Jun 2009 6:02 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Rarely am I ever so impressed with someone's portrayal of my characters. However, in this case, I am willing to make an exception. Philip was written beautifully and I have nothing negative to say regarding him. I must admit that I enjoyed reading my character through someone else's point of view - you wrote him and so there's a little bit of you in him. Unique but welcome. I was truly impressed that you remembered his eyes changing to red when angered.

    Well, well, well. That'll teach you fools to mess with the Snape family line! I'm wondering, will the rest of the school believe the boys that a malevolent vampire attacked them? I think Dumbledore might suspect something and, of course, Harry, Draco and Sev will know. The punishment Philip doled was inspiring!

    Now, you must write chapter six of Return to Prince Manor before updating Two Hawks Hunting. This is as good as a cliffhanger! Besides, I can't get enough of my violet-eyed vampire.

    Ta for now.

    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you thank you! I'm so happy you liked how I wrote him . . .I was a bit nervous.

    And I would remember stuff like that because its important and shows how different people react physically and mentally when angry. 

    It will indeed and they might not be believed, but who cares? They should be mocked for trying to kill their teacher and his son.  Glad you liked that punishment.

    I'll be writing the next chapter soon!

Title: Ambushed! 19 Jun 2009 4:07 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I Love the character of Philip and can't wait to see how it develops.

    As for Katie, it is nice to see Harry show attraction to someone outside his immediate circle, and I hope the love he's getting from Snape and Draco will make him confident with her.

    Author's Response:

    You'll be learning a lot more about him in the next chapter. 

    It should make him feel more sure of himself so he won;t be quite as awkward when it comes time to ask her to the ball.

    And I've just updated Two hawks Hunting too!

Title: Ambushed! 19 Jun 2009 8:48 am
Reviewer: Devilishlycute (Signed) [Report This]
    Great Chapter. Wow Philip is very protective isn't he. Wouldn't want to meet him in a dark alley........ hmmmm then again maybe I do hehehehe, but definately NOT if he is that angry. Can't wait til he meets Sev that should be some get together..

    Author's Response:

    Yes, he is and you'd only want to meet him there because he's so sexy . . .and hopefully after he's fed. 

    No, never mess with an angry vampire. 

    Yes that will be a blast! Those two should get on like a house on fire.

    And just wait till you see what's going on in my new story Two Hawks Hunting.

Title: Ambushed! 19 Jun 2009 6:56 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! That's interesting. Harry and Katie. Yeah. Why not? I'm glad that Philip revealed himself, or should I say "gorgeous eyes".

    Great chapter Snapegirl, and I can 't wait to see those idiots get their comeuppance. Thank God that they are safe!

    Author's Response:

    Oh and they will be in such trouble and finally Sev can meet his ancestor.

    That should be an interesting conversation at the least, especially since they have similar temperaments.

    I like Katie with Harry, she seems like a good person and understanding and she likes Severus.

Title: Ambushed! 19 Jun 2009 6:01 am
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    YAY! They meet eachother! I so happy!

    Author's Response: Great! I was happy too! And I've updated Hawks too! It's a warm fuzzy chapter! :)

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