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Reviews For Return to Prince Manor
Author's Response: Yeah that's exactly what it did.
Very nice chapter. I like the story of the cup ^_^ thnak you Author's Response: No, because there are certain rules that even the fae have to follow, and given the way the wizards used the cup in the tournament, as a binder of contracts, there's no way they can un do it Much as they would like to. Thanks, I'm so glad you liked it! BTW I've updated my other story, Two hawks Hunting also.
Author's Response: yes, they are, I saw no reason for them not to be. Hufflepuffs seem friendly people on the whole. And Harry will have plenty of enemies later on without adding Cedric. Hope you enjoy the next part and thanks for reading!
Write more, I'm anxious to see what happens now. Yes, let Phil reveal himself to Albus, but only in private. Author's Response: Phil will try very hard to protect harry, but somethings are bound to happen to the kid considering who he is. I will be writing more soon and hope you enjoy it. That's a good idea and thanks for your vote.
Loved the Goblet and the fae connection to it and all the Arthurian stuff too. And Harry and Sev in the potions lab was so freaking funny! I just busted out laughing. Hmm, I say yes. Albus will be so shocked! Author's Response: I liked that part too! LOL! okay Phil will be revealed . . .not sure when yet though. Thanks as always!
Author's Response: I'm glad for that! Phil will eventually do so and then you'll see Albus just keel over.
Author's Response: Okay, he will . . .just not sure when yet. Thanks!
You have created believable characters and this is one of my favorite story arcs in the fanfic world ! Keep it up! Vana Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hesitated on doing the sequel because I was afraid I might ruin the original story, but then so many people encouraged me to go on and I got re-inspired by them so I wrote the beginning and then it just snowballed from there. And I have plenty more things that will happen to them, both in and out of school, because this book will cover their return to the manor as well, hence the title. And lots more drama and romance too! So thanks for reading and your kind words and hope you enjoy the rest of this!
Author's Response: Aw that's too bad! I had wondered where you were! I missed you. Hope you continue to enjoy and review this one and have you seen my new series, Broken Wings? It has a different kind of Harry and Snape mentor story in it and maybe you could read it when you've got time, I'd like to know what you think of it. I'm working on the sequel, Two Hawks Hunting now. |
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