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Reviews For Return to Prince Manor
I enjoyed the unique twist of Harry battling the lamia and not a dragon. I also enjoyed the end of the chapter where Severus banished the she-demon back to hell. I cannot imagine how much power and mental strength it must have recquired. As with Ron, it is rare to see the man in a positive light and you portrayed that here beautifully. I can't tell you how pleased I was that Philip played a large role in this chapter. I truly love when he is overprotective mode, with his violet eyes flaring and his teeth bared and a soft warning hiss escaping his throat... I did enjoy the sword-fighting lessons; actually, I look forward to them every time I see a new update (within reason; I don't expect a lesson every chapter ;)). The scroll Harry had to retrieve intrigues me. Keep smiling and keep writing. Author's Response: yeah, I wanted Ron to finally catch a girl who wasn't from Hogwarts, just to lvien things up. Glad you liked the lamia and yes, it did take a lot out of Severus to banish that evil thing. I love portraying him positively. Yeah Phil was great here and he'll be giving old DD a piece of his mind soon. Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Thanks I'm really enjoying re-writing the tournament.
Author's Response: Thanks I will! Glad you enjoyed the battle!
Author's Response: Yeah. Dragons aren't the only dangerous creature out there. Glad you liked my creatures. I'd like to read more of your story, so hopefully you post soon!
Author's Response: You'll see what they did and what scores they got next chapter. I thought Ron deserved some of his own time in the spotlight and his own girlfriend too. More to come later on! Thanks for reading!
Author's Response: It was and Sev might just be in the paper for that. Yes, they are, and I loved hooking them up with people!
Author's Response: I wanted to do something totally different and unexpected. Harry sure did kick butt, because of his extra training.
can't wait to see whats next...>, Author's Response: Thanks! I will have more surprises in store for you later on with the tournament. |
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