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Title: Myths Alive! 16 Nov 2022 10:13 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Great action-packed chapter! I liked how the first task was different from the norm. Crabbe and Goyle writing poetry is hilarious!
Title: Myths Alive! 27 Jul 2011 1:03 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! That was amazing! I loved all the different creatures, they were a lot more dangerous, and interesting than those in the books. Bagman's such an arse! Glad Sev was there to save everyone.
Title: Myths Alive! 30 Sep 2009 4:10 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I was thrilled to see that Ron was able to find a suitable female friend besides Hermione. It is a rare treat to see the young redhead as a mature teenager with thoughts and feelings of his own; so many times the story is centered around Harry. Ron certainly deserves a girl of his own and I'm happy that in this, at least, he's able to have one.

    I enjoyed the unique twist of Harry battling the lamia and not a dragon. I also enjoyed the end of the chapter where Severus banished the she-demon back to hell. I cannot imagine how much power and mental strength it must have recquired. As with Ron, it is rare to see the man in a positive light and you portrayed that here beautifully.

    I can't tell you how pleased I was that Philip played a large role in this chapter. I truly love when he is overprotective mode, with his violet eyes flaring and his teeth bared and a soft warning hiss escaping his throat... I did enjoy the sword-fighting lessons; actually, I look forward to them every time I see a new update (within reason; I don't expect a lesson every chapter ;)).

    The scroll Harry had to retrieve intrigues me.

    Keep smiling and keep writing.

    Author's Response:

    yeah, I wanted Ron to finally catch a girl who wasn't from Hogwarts, just to lvien things up. 

    Glad you liked the lamia and yes, it did take a lot out of Severus to banish that evil thing. I love portraying him positively.

    Yeah Phil was great here and he'll be giving old DD a piece of his mind soon. 

    Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Myths Alive! 29 Sep 2009 12:29 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Great change to the tournament! I really liked it. But that lamia was scary. I'm glad it was gone and I love how Severus verbally thrashed Bagman. Update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks I'm really enjoying re-writing the tournament.
Title: Myths Alive! 27 Sep 2009 6:40 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow what a fight! I was really impressed. This just keeps on getting better. Post more soon, I'm worried about Harry.

    Author's Response: Thanks I will! Glad you enjoyed the battle!
Title: Myths Alive! 23 Sep 2009 4:30 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow....Now that thing is scary. And I thought the GoF's dragons were difficult. Yeesh! You are one sly author y'know...speaking of which, I really ought to start working on the next chap for Runner. *wanders off to do so..hopefully*

    Author's Response: Yeah. Dragons aren't the only dangerous creature out there.  Glad you liked my creatures.  I'd like to read more of your story, so hopefully you post soon!
Title: Myths Alive! 22 Sep 2009 5:01 pm
Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was good. Very inventive opponents. How did the other champions get on against them? Ron's scene made a nice bit of variety in the chapter.

    Author's Response: You'll see what they did and what scores they got next chapter.  I thought Ron deserved some of his own time in the spotlight and his own girlfriend too.  More to come later on! Thanks for reading!
Title: Myths Alive! 22 Sep 2009 3:45 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! that was some first task! I loved the changes a lot, and the way Severus told Bagman off was brilliant, the stupid man lol. The part with the Ron, Vince and Greg made me chuckle as well, such typical teenage boys :D

    Author's Response: It was and Sev might just be in the paper for that.  Yes, they are, and I loved hooking them up with people!
Title: Myths Alive! 21 Sep 2009 9:34 pm
Reviewer: Devilishlycute (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow!!!! Your creatures were definiately totally different from the original dragons. I liked them. Harry sure kicked ass. lol Great chapter.

    Author's Response: I wanted to do something totally different and unexpected. Harry sure did kick butt, because of his extra training. 
Title: Myths Alive! 21 Sep 2009 3:13 pm
Reviewer: -NightRise- (Signed) [Report This]
    nice change to the tournament!
    can't wait to see whats next...>,

    Author's Response: Thanks! I will have more surprises in store for you later on with the tournament. 

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