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Reviews For Return to Prince Manor
And I hope Harry figures out how to translate the scroll.
But now they're really in for it. A brawl! Hope they don't get arrested! Author's Response: Thanks. I like describing the healing scenes, I used to want to be a doctor. yes, it is very different but it's also as difficult in its own way. Learning a completely new language and then translating a riddle is hard. He sure did and Severus knew it too. Arrested? Umm . . .go read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Hurry and let me know how you liked the next part please!
Author's Response: No and they will be in a lot of trouble. Check out the next chapter to see what happens to them. It's bad . . .
I loved the idea of using a sphinx for the second task. Simply beautiful creatures and the tast is one of pure mental strength; a brilliant twist from the original tasks that tested only one's outer strength. Now I am curious as to what the final task shall be. Poor Harry; he must be slightly annoyed that Philip knows Greek but won't help him. You and your damnable cliffhangers; I think you're going to beat me in that category when I was once notorious for them. ::grins:: Just do me a favor. Update soon. Keep smiling and keep writing! Always yours, Jewels. Author's Response: Yes, well there will always be people who think when a professor has a son or daughter in their clas, they favor them. The last task will be different as well, and I'm glad you like the sphinx. Harry is kind of annoyed but he understands that as a champion he needs to figure things out, mostly, on his own. Haha, I am known for my cliffies! But . . .I've updated!
Author's Response: Yup and here's the next part for you to read ! It says that you like reading about pub fights, LOL!
Author's Response: Oh yes, he will. NOT! He will be very upset and angry, as expected. Thanks for reading!
Author's Response: Thanks and now you can as it's been posted!
WEll written chapter! I think I like the new challenge, although I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop--it really seems to "safe" a challenge, what's the catch? V. Author's Response: Oh yes, no doubt about that one! Well, it will require a lot of research and the riddle they have to solve is quite hard and none of them have the same one. And there is one other thing that will happen. |
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