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Title: Merlin Help Us All 17 Nov 2022 12:39 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    That was quite a brawl! Severus handled the boys well.
Title: Merlin Help Us All 16 Nov 2022 10:31 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the concept of translating a scroll - very academic. The barroom scene and resulting consequences were fun to read about, though had me shaking my head at the impetuousness.
Title: Merlin Help Us All 27 Jul 2011 1:06 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    LMAO! harry and Draco in jail! Such a typical Snape thing to do! Poor kids, but it's just too funny! My dad would've done something similar.

    Love how they all get on. This is such a great story!
Title: Merlin Help Us All 01 Jul 2011 10:41 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! What a great chapter! Severus was strict, but he was also right. They won't be starting any barroom brawls in the future, I'd bet. It sort of reminds me of my dad. I could see him doing that to me or my sister if we eever got caught breaking the law.
Title: Merlin Help Us All 26 Oct 2009 11:21 pm
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow what a punishment. I can't believe Severus left them in the jail cell. Stupid Krum. I'm glad everything is forgiven. Awesome chapter. :)

    Author's Response: Yeah well he really wanted to impress upon them to behave and NOT get into trouble, especially in public. I know a few people whoactually had that done to them and it really works! And I wrote the Yule Ball chapter soon after this one and that one is happier!
Title: Merlin Help Us All 12 Oct 2009 10:26 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Um...updated? lol im sure I read this chapter the other day :)

    Author's Response: That was my fault, I clicked on the wrong story when I really wanted to update Bubble Bubble. So that's the one which is updated! Sorry!
Title: Merlin Help Us All 08 Oct 2009 7:25 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry and Draco in JAIL--oh you're brilliant! I nearly died laughing, they reminded me of my sons, who thankfully were never arrested. And I loved how they ran right to Sev when they were released, despite all their whining about not wanting to go home. It proves that Sev is a good parent.

    Can't wait to see how the translating goes!

    Author's Response:

    I loved writing that scene, it was such a fluffy moment, and even though they knew Sev was going to hand them their heads, when all was said and done, he was still their dad and they loved him. 

    The translating will be very tough at first. 

    Check out my PM Halloween story that I just posted!

Title: Merlin Help Us All 08 Oct 2009 7:20 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    This was an amazing chapter! I really like Sev's parenting style. He uses a combination of tough love and uncondiitonal love that's really refreshing. Good to see that in a story! Keep up the good work!

    Author's Response: Yes that's exactly what he does! Thanks!
Title: Merlin Help Us All 06 Oct 2009 7:34 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, now that was an intresting chapter, to say the least. Now if they can just stay out of trouble till the second challenge.

    Author's Response:

    uh huh. Well that'll be as much of a challenge as the task itself, LOL!

    Chec out my new Halloween story set  in this AU to see what trouble Harry gets into with Katie. It's called Bubble Bubble.

Title: Merlin Help Us All 03 Oct 2009 12:39 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol loved the chapter, the idea of having Harry and Draco spend the night made me chuckle, it was such a parent type thing to do, im glad that Smidgeon was there to be with them though so that they werent alone :)

    Author's Response:

    Well, I couldn't leave them all alone there, I'm not that cruel!

    Check out my new Halloween story set in this universe, it's called Bubble Bubble

    and thanks for reading!


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