Draco’s having a difficult time. I appreciated Sarai’s description of house elves and how they came to be bound to wizards.
I'm enjoying this story and I love your original characters but Luna is about 13 in this story and to have her kissing a man who is much older fae is a bit disturbing.
"I do not threaten, I promise." Heeheee. Sarai was really sharp in this chapter. Mila
great chapter, i hope dumbles heeds the warnings and speaks with the ministry people, well if he does remains to be seen.
poor draco he can't get hermione away from her books, he needs to come up with something, show hermione what a good time is.
Dumbledore better watch it, I wouldn't want Sarai or Titania angry with me! Scary thought! But it was great how she told him off and Crouch too, the idiot!
Have to read the rest of Manger, can't wait! Loved the whole story of that one and this one too!
Go Sarai1 Kick their butts! I just love a gutsy warrior. She suits Severus perfectly.
Hermione and Draco . . .a little trouble in paradise?
Hope somebody can convince Hermione that all work and no play might make Draco leave!
Poor Draco. . . the pains of young love!
I loved the chapter.
V.
Ah poor Draco, he is in need of some lady attention hehe. Loved Sarai in this chapter, she is totally cool :)
Poor Draco; he is right though about Hermione. She pushes herself far harder than she should and it will eventually affect her health. I know that education is important, particularly to her, but you need to take time to have fun and be with friends. Time off refreshes you mind and actually helps you retain knowledge better.
I have a feeling that there are certain Ministry officials that are going to feel the burn of pressure soon. I doubt very much that they will acquiesce to the request about the Cup easily, but I hope that something will happen to convince them. I wonder what the third task will be?
Hmm, an intresting couple of chapters. Will all turn out right with Draco and Hermoine? I do wonder how you are going to play out the final task. Kudos on a well written chapter.
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