Oh my goodness, what a series of events. I liked your take on Draco the bouncing ferret, and so glad that Phil (and hopefully, Smidgen) are along for the ride with Harry.
I'm passing out reading it1 Please let Cedric live, I don't think his death is necessary to the story.
great chapter....loved the deal with the runespore
Excellent chapter. As inventive as always and I especially liked the runespoor. Not sure about Cedric. I suppose it depends if you want Harry to feel guilty for suggesting they share the cup. Maybe if you do kill him off he could have a more heroic end than just a quick AK.
Great chapter! I particularly loved hte Runespoor and hte way you integrated the fake Moody turning Draco into a ferret. Yes, Cedric ought to live! With Phil there and Smidgen there ought to at least be a chance of him surviving. Please let Cedric live. As always, you've done a fabulous job with this chapter.
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| 14 May 2010 5:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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I should have done this yesterday but I caught a bad cold, so, please, forgive me.
Hmm... Who shall live and who shall die? I think Cedric should die; it will help move the plot along and keep the readers anticipated for the next part of the story. :bites lip: This is a very difficult decision for me to make: I have half a mind to tell you to kill Philip as well but I /really/ want to see him confront Albus. Hmm... but that is easily rectifyable. Poison him; a slow, agonizing poison that destroys him from the inside out. (Am I cruel or what?)
I really, really liked the different third task. I was biting my nails the entire time I read him traveling through that maze.
I'm sorry this is short.
Update soon my darling.
Always yours,
Jewels
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| 14 May 2010 1:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Valin (Anonymous)
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ahhh, mean cliffhanger! Great chapter though!!
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| 14 May 2010 7:43 am
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| Reviewer: LilyLove (Anonymous)
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By far the best version of the maze that I've read.
(Let him live!! I like imagining RP!)
Oooh exciting stuff! surely Uncle Phil will protect the boys now that he has gone with them? I never was a fan of dear ole Cedric dying just because he happened to be there lol, cant wait to find out what happens next chapter :)
I dunno! I just want to read the next chapter. You've done very well with this one. Kudos.
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