| Title: Call to Arms
| 15 May 2010 7:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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Talk about an intense and well-thought-out chapter.
I simply loved the battle; the descriptions of everyone's actions was interesting and I especially loved when Sarai appeared. With the Fairy Queen, of all immortals, behind her! I could truly picture her charging forth on her beautiful steed to kick some Death Eaters' asses. I admit that I was shocked by the historical exchange between Titania and Voldemort.
I think you should save Smidgen. Smidgen holds more merit and a bigger role than Philip does. To that extent... you need to kill the powerful vampire. Have a Dementor kiss him. Have someone poison him. But, Kathy, he needs to die. And not just for the fact that it would cause turmoil to your other characters.
Think about it. I know you'll come up with a creative method. But I won't relent on this one, I'm sorry.
This chapter and this story has been well worth the wait and I enjoyed every moment, especially the one's centered around my character. But the readers need to realize that he's not a permanent member of the family, that he belongs to no one and offers protection to those whom he believes deserve it. I think, though, he deserves a noble death.
As for smidgen... there is more to her tale than a lot of readers know. Probably even more than you know. Give her a second chance. Sarai and Severus still need to get married and she should be a part of that.
Kill Philip. Not Smidgen.
I know this is a bit dark compared to my normal reviews but I wanted to get the point across.
As always, I am eagerly looking forward to your next update.
Lots and lots of love,
Jewels.
| Title: Call to Arms
| 15 May 2010 6:58 pm
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| Reviewer: DazzlingD (Anonymous)
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I think Smidgen should live. This was a great chapter. Looking forward to the next update.
| Title: Call to Arms
| 15 May 2010 5:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Teddybear (Anonymous)
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I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! I think that Smidgen should live!!!! I can't wait to read more.
Oh my gosh live live live! please let her live :D I had a little lump forming when she went still in Harrys' hands, his 1st real friend that has done so much for them all, she needs to live :)
This was awesome, absolutely amazing! I loved it! I'm glad Cedric lived and I hope Smidgen will too. Can't wait to see what happens to Old Snake Face.
Ok if I hadn't said this before this is the most AWESOME story EVER!!!!! I can't get enough I sure hope that Smidgen gets to live as Harry and Draco and even Sev still need her. Great job can't wait to see what happens to old Moldy shorts!
| Title: Call to Arms
| 15 May 2010 6:31 am
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| Reviewer: Micheela (Anonymous)
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Wow, just wow. Awesome battle scene with justice for Moody and Cedric. I think Smidgen deserves to live. Why save Harry from the guilt of Cedric's death only to inflice Smidgen's upon him?
Let Smidgen live. I like Smidgen too much to see her die...
| Title: Call to Arms
| 15 May 2010 5:11 am
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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Awesome! My god, this was amazing! I loved every bit of it! I do hope Voldemort finally gets his due without any more deaths for the light!!
loved this chapter! please dont kill smidgeon. just make it that she will be wounded for the rest of her life and unable to be a messanger and therefore lives with the snape family! :D
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