A nail-biting cliffhanger! I love the seaside setting.
| Title: Come Sail Away
| 16 Jun 2010 12:13 am
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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*glares playfully* They will all be alright, yes? I liked the chapter, I'm just not too fond of the cliffie. Kudos on a well written chapter anyways.
Oh, oh... trouble seems to find Harry and the gang no matter what they do! I do hope they'll be OK and rescue will find them soon.
Excellent chapter but did you have to leave us with a cliffhanger? :) And bored?!?! of course not, I'm so looking forward to their summer adventure... Great work!
| Title: Come Sail Away
| 15 Jun 2010 2:38 am
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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Oh, my... It doesn't look good...and Harry is not very good swimmer, is he?
I hope they will be o.k. and rescue will come soon...
P.S.: Must you end it like that?!?!!!!! Update soon!
Bored?? never! Im very much looking forward to reading about their summer adventures :) katies home sounds lovely too.
Excellent chapter! And once again you leave us hanging on that dreaded cliff. . .
looking forward to your next update!
V.
How did I know that they would end up in a situation like this? Harry's luck has struck once again! I do hope that they will all be alright and will find a safe place to ride out the rest of the storm. Perhaps they will discover an old smuggler's hideaway? :D
| Title: Come Sail Away
| 14 Jun 2010 11:47 am
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| Reviewer: Trimelda (Anonymous)
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This was a great chapter, very suspenseful. But did I miss something from the last chapter? One minute Harry is taking a shower and the next minute they are swimming for their lives. What happened in between?
Author's Response: Whoops! I just realized I never uploaded chapter 35! I thought I had, but guess not! Okay, I'm going to take this one down and repost the right one. This one is chapter 36!
OMG No you did NOT leave that as your cliffy!!!!! J/K. Wow what a place to leave off and make us wait for the next chapter! If I had a shark on the verge of attacking me and the people I loved first off I'd freak and then I would be trying to figure out how to get outta there lol. But why doesn't Katie just call up another dolphin? Or something. I honestly think that Katie or Harry or a dolphin should take care of the shark because if Sev comes up on that it won't be good and if you do put Sev and Katie's dad on it then Sev just might have a heart attack! I was kind of confused though at the beginning because when you left off last time Harry was at the manor and now he's capsized in the middle of the ocean with Katie, Draco and Hermonie. But I got over that as soon as I realized that I hadn't missed anything! Love it waiting on the next chapter!
Author's Response: Whoops! I just realized I never uploaded chapter 35! I thought I had, but guess not! Okay, I'm going to take this one down and repost the right one. This one is chapter 36!
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