That is not a good start to their visit. Thanks for the action packed chapter.
Harrowing experience for sure
| Title: Summer Squall
| 19 Jun 2010 3:29 am
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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Awesome chapter, though I have no clue what they would do other than what they already did! Can they do some charm or make some sounds to make them smell repulsive to the shark?
Oh no! a cliff! surely her Dad and Severus will be there to prevent them being shark food lol, lets hope the Dolphin gets them there in time, becoming a sharks lunch doesnt sound like much fun! :)
Huh! Another cliffie!! Loved the chapter, hate the cliffie. :) I hope that they'll be OK. I don't care who saves them as long as they are saved! ;) Another great chapter, thanks for the update.
| Title: Summer Squall
| 17 Jun 2010 11:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Arrrrg! Cliffies, I can't stand cliffies! I loved this chapter and all, but you're driving me crazy! *hears voice that says 'what do you mean driving?' and glowers at it.* Kudos on a well written chapter (btw, Draco said 'sharl' not shark. Just thought to point that out.)
I do hope that they will all be alright. I wonder if it would be possible to 'convince' the shark to go away somehow? At least the calvary is on the way, guided by a dolphin...
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