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Title: Sirius Misconceptions
| 31 Jul 2010 6:36 pm
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Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Siri, you're an idiot. *groans in exasperation.* Kudos on a well written chapter. Don't kill Siri, k? Just knock some sense into him.
Hmm I wonder if its wrong of me not to have minded Dudley being poisoned...it certainly would have taught him a lesson...though I guess he is just an impulsive jealous teeneager so maybe death would be a bit harsh hehe I kinda wanted to slap Sirius in this chapter, when he was sparing with Severus and right at the end there, how many times does he need Sev to kick his butt before he realises that he isnt the scrawny ass boy he knew...
Stupid Dudley, he was so afraid of seeing the snake yet he wants to steal the egg form the poisonous snake. Dudley is sooo stupid. Wow the ending to this was dramatic. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)
Title: Sirius Misconceptions
| 24 Jul 2010 1:41 am
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Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous)
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Umm....I'm really hoping that Sirius will come to his senses. If there's two ways of doing it, it would either be Tuney smacking him or Harry stunning him...or something.
That idiot... Sirius is in for a world of hurt...
Title: Sirius Misconceptions
| 23 Jul 2010 7:28 am
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Reviewer: Tutti Frutti (Anonymous)
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Awesome chapter!!! And I seriously doubt Sirius will come to his senses. He's waay to hot-headed for his own good, meaning he is incapable of thinking before he acts. Hehe. Can Sirius cause Harry some harm? Please?? I think it might fit quite nicely in the plot. And Harry wont like Sirius anymore since they obviously don't get along too well. Well anyway, great chapter once again and I look forward to the next update!
Great chapter as always, don't let Hannah bring you down. You weren't bashing him and you write very well.
-Autumn
Title: Sirius Misconceptions
| 22 Jul 2010 11:56 pm
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Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous)
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Enjoyed the boys falling out - can't have things running too smoothly. Petunia seems to have turned into a rational human being, but she's still got a bit of work to do on her family! I did think Severus was showing off a bit with his superior fighting skills - it seemed a bit rude to a guest, even if they're not your favourite person. But, hopefully you've got a good way of getting them on the same side eventually. And I hope the runespoor survives to hatch its eggs.
Title: Sirius Misconceptions
| 22 Jul 2010 9:47 pm
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I don't understand why you have such a hatred for Sirius. I mean, honestly, he'd never attack Harry, even if this mangled up world you've created where Dudley is his new son. Enough with the Sirius bashing already; it's really tiresome. Not to mention completely unoriginal and uncreative.
~HannahRammah
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