Aw... Only three more chapters??:(
This was a really great chapter! I am really pleased with the way you chose to send Sarai back. Excellent choice! Can't wait for the next chapter !
A sad and wonderful chapter. Poor baby Alexander..as Sev said he never had a chance to live. I want to do something so evil to Maeve.
| Title: Darkest Before Dawn
| 31 Oct 2011 5:22 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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You've not lost your touch in writing a tearjerker of a chapter!
I must say that as awfully sad as this chapter was it was very well written, I was literally welling up with tears the whole way through, to go through such a horrible thing seems beyond comprehension for me, a mothers worst nightmare to be sure, I hope she can come through her grief eventually :(
| Title: Darkest Before Dawn
| 30 Oct 2011 8:17 am
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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No, life isn't fair, much as we might wish it. My great-grandparents hang on by a thread, as does my great uncle. I think only their stubborness keeps them alive now. And like as not, I will lose my grandma and mother someday. I offer my condolences, and pray that there is light in your life to help you keep going.
Good chapter... Though it Sarai dies I think I'll simply be devastated. She has to live for her othe children. While it is a terrible loss, there are still four other children and a husband who need her... Ahh!
Still, it was a good chapter:)
aww. Im sorry but I really didnt like the ending...:S
That was just too cruel, although admittedly things had been getting a bit too cosy and comfortable for the Snapes and I'd been wondering how you were going to be able to bring something less idyllic into the story.
| Title: New Arrivals
| 24 Oct 2011 5:52 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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This was an excellent chapter, though very sad. Unfortunately, bad things happen to good people, and tragedy and death is a part of life. While it wasn't fair for the Unseelie Queen to kill the Snapes' baby, no one ever said life was fair.
One can hope that the family draws closer during this time of sorrow and maybe even discovers what really happened, though I don't think that likely, since the death was meant to look like natural causes and no one is the wiser.
Very relaistically done, I cried.
Well that most definitely SUCKED!!!!! And I was enjoying this story, hmph, not any more!!!!!
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