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Title: A Troublesome Afternoon 03 Sep 2009 1:40 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Cool chapter, I do love how Severus can make his students tremble with just his voice and glares lol, looking forward to seeing what he will do to them in detention...at 6:30am...harsh lol Rita seemed as awful as always, I think I may have gotten the urge to break her quill if I was Harry :D

    Author's Response: Harry had the urge to do so many times during the interview and the only reason why he didn't was because Sev taught him manners.  yeah, gotta love Sergeant Snape! And he'll make them regret that little bit of House dissension.
Title: A Troublesome Afternoon 03 Sep 2009 5:18 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Hermine!!!! Krum out cold! wonderful twist! Can't wait for the next update.

    Author's Response: Thanks! Hermione rules in this story. She'll be helping Draco and Harry a lot this time around. And Krum will continue to try her patience.
Title: Defense Lessons of Different Kinds 02 Sep 2009 10:46 pm
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    I do not understand the nickname Katie-did. I think that was in the previous chapter. I liked how Draco punched Krum like that, that was awesome and I'm glad he didn't get into too much trouble.

    Author's Response: Harry's nickname for Katie is a play on the name 'katydid', which is a name for an insect in the US more commonly known as a cicada, it's related to a cricket.  Yeah Krum was asking for it.
Title: A Troublesome Afternoon 02 Sep 2009 9:22 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah,poor Crum. You made him a monster. M

    Author's Response: Yeah but not as bad as some of the others.  He;s just a jerk, Moody and Karkaroff are worse.
Title: A Troublesome Afternoon 02 Sep 2009 7:55 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm just curious how come Draco got detention, but none of the Gryffindors got detention. I mean at least Draco didn't do anything, but Ron hexed Nott. Uh, Harry didn't do anything I guess.

    Great chappie. I loved when Hermione hexed Krum!!! Go gir!!!

    Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm dying to know what they've go to do for detention.

    Author's Response:

    Draco was fighting with his Housemates, self-defense but still involved, when Snape came down the corridor. That's what he saw, his Slytherins fighting each other. He came too late to catch Ron in the act of hexing Nott, so Ron didn't get detention. If Sev had seen him, however, he would have gotten one. But he can only punish those he saw casting hexes. Harry was just watching, he wasn't involved.

    Hermione is goign to be a lot more willing to stand up and fight in this book, especially now that she knows Draco likes her that way.

    Sev's detention will not be pretty, he's very mad at them.

Title: A Troublesome Afternoon 02 Sep 2009 6:22 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah. That little bug needs to be squashed. No doubt she's going to cause all kinds of trouble for Harry and co. I liked the chapter very much. Very witty.

    Author's Response: Yes, she will. She's so selfish and spiteful! Thanks!
Title: A Troublesome Afternoon 02 Sep 2009 6:02 pm
Reviewer: Starbuck1332 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent as always - thanks for the update. You did capture Rita very well - spiteful woman that she is.

    Question? How come you "hpfanfiction" website is not updating any more? Just wondering.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I'm glad you liked how I portrayed her since this is my first time doing so.

    As fo HPFF, they're doing some kind of maintainance on the site and we haven't been able to post anything for over a week, it was supposed to be finished by Sept 1 st, but so far nothing is ready yet. 

Title: A Troublesome Afternoon 02 Sep 2009 7:53 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love draco and hermione together. OK, now I'm curious, whst does snape do to his slytherins? Great chapter.

    Author's Response: I was really surprised at how well that pairing worked out. And Sev will have a pretty good revenge/punishment on his Slytherins, don't worry.
Title: Defense Lessons of Different Kinds 01 Sep 2009 2:41 am
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I greatly enjoyed this chapter.

    Moody's lesson was intriguing and horrifying at the same time; I don't like the idea of any one being able to control someone. Even in a story, I don't like it. Moody just proves how dangerous it is to let someone have access to your mind. Once they learn all your secrets, you're doomed because you cannot fight back.

    Philip's sword-fighting lesson was a joy to read. I think I may steal some of your dialogue...

    I was happy to see Harry and his friends acting like typical teenagers at the end of the chapter. Merlin knows that child deserves some happiness. I hope he's not too nervous with the upcoming first task, what with Severus and Harry protecting him and guiding him along.

    I mentioned this once before, of Severus and Harry being Animagi. You certainly set me straight! I have an idea and, please, feel free to shoot it down if it doesn't coincide or work with your story. Apart from invisibility, Philip could follow Harry and Draco around in his Animagus form. Again, feel free to shoot it down. I won't be offended!

    I reviewed like I promised.

    Please update when you can.

    Always yours,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    Moody is meant to be scary in this chapter, he's a psycho though the kids don't know that. Philip does recognize the signs however, being around for so long.

    I plan on Harry having a few more moments like that last one, maybe with his brother and father next time.

    Phil's Animagus form sounds like a good idea, but I don't know what it is. You'll need to tell me that.

    Oh and could you also review THH? I think you'll like what is going on there. Lots of angst!

Title: Defense Lessons of Different Kinds 31 Aug 2009 7:44 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    This just keeps getting better and better. Can't wait for the next chapter!!

    Author's Response: Thanks and the next one should be posted shortly.

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