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Title: Accident or By Design? 18 Aug 2009 8:40 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter was excellent, especially Draco, calling Krum the "Orc from the North" and Smidgen's idea of making the Durmstrangers' furry cloaks come alive. It was well worth the wait for the chapter. I'm looking forward to the next chapter very much. It always makes my day when I get the update notice in my email inbox.

    Bravo!

    Dancingkatz

    Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much! I always love hearing from you too! Draco had some of the best lines in this one, as did Smidgen. The next one should be just as fun, with more Phil and a chance to see Moody in action.
Title: Accident or By Design? 18 Aug 2009 8:27 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good to know that Harry has the help of Phil and possibly others this time, Draco getting a punch in to Krum was just perfect! :)

    Author's Response:

    Phil will be helping him as much as he can and so will Katie, hermione, Draco, and Ron.  I loved that scene, Draco was just so much an older brother.

Title: Accident or By Design? 18 Aug 2009 7:41 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh, "critical" part two. Why does that scare me!!

    Great chapter. I hope that Sev is not too hard on Draco, since he was only defending Harry. I can't help--I loved when he socked Krum!!! Way to go Draco.

    Oh, and when Sev almost strangled Karakoff, well...that was strangely satisfying, even though I'm not a violent person!

    Phew, I think I need something to calm me down. Between all the action with THH, and this story, I need a drink. Okay, I'm at work, so I won't do that, but maybe a calming herbal tea.

    Okay, so I hope that you are working on updates to both your stories, because I won't be able to relax until you do.

    Author's Response:

    because something bad might happen?

    Severus knows that and he also knows that since he nearly strangled Karkaroff, he shouldn't punish Draco for doing essentially the same thing.

    I know what you mean, they are both vile people and it's nice to see them get what they deserve.

    Here's some virtual tea, Pandora, and a Calming Draught (courtesy of Severus)

    I am working on the update to Two Hawks tonight. So you can relax, hopefully.  I just finsihed updating my Sev/Lily romance on ff.net called Irresistible Chemistry, if you wanted to check it out in the meantime. It also features an odd pairing of James and Petunia, but I think it's sweet!

Title: Accident or By Design? 18 Aug 2009 7:18 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Good going Draco. When Krum makes his moves on Hermione, Draco may actually have to let his feelings be shown.

    Author's Response: Oh yes, and he will. Now way will he stand by and let the overgrown orc take away his Hermione.
Title: Accident or By Design? 18 Aug 2009 4:33 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    I am still loving this story, and I absolutely adore Phil. I can't wait to see what Draco's punishment is. Maybe Severus will have him eat an entire bowl of ice cream?

    Author's Response: Great! And that would be a funny kind of punishment. Sev won't be too hard on him. Thanks for reading!
Title: Accident or By Design? 18 Aug 2009 4:15 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved the line "I can always pay him a little midnight visit and let my teeth talk to his throat."

    Philip truly would do that.

    I loved Severus and Draco in this chapter; both are loyal to Harry and willing to protect him, no matter what. When Karkaroff made that deragatory comment, I wanted to hit him - but Severus took of that nicely. That former Death Eater's really pushing it, mentioning Lily, whom Severus dearly loved.

    Moody, the sly, Death Eater spy, is really going to have to watch himself. When Philip is on the hunt, his prey never lives to tell the tale. It would certainly serve Crouch jr. right. Do your homework man! Check and see if the Snapes have an ancient vampire for a guardian. Why don't you tell that to your master and see how Voldemort reacts to one of his most dangerous foes?

    Albus... you meddling old fool. Consider yourself lucky, for now, that Philip has not had time to visit you. But, he will. And I can't wait to see it. He'll put you in your place, old mad, make no mistake of that! And you can't threaten him with his family because you don't where they are!

    I am anxious to read the First Task.

    Please update soon.

    Always yours,
    Jewels.

    - I was not trying to annoy you about asking about Angel. I was simply curious. And I apologize if you thought I was.

    Author's Response:

    I liked that line too! I especially loved when Sev slugged karkaroff, he really got on my nerves, but then he was supposed to. 

    I think Moody is overconfident in his own abilities, as you'll see.  Which will be his undoing.

    Yeah, Phil will be paying Albus a visit after the First Task. 

    I'm anxious about writing the First task.

     

    I wasn't annoyed.  You know I wasn't. And I've just updated IC.

Title: Cup of Wonders 13 Aug 2009 1:10 am
Reviewer: MilkaZen (Signed) [Report This]
    Since it's a fae cup, shouldn't they be able to unbind harry from the tournament?

    Very nice chapter. I like the story of the cup ^_^

    thnak you

    Author's Response: No, because there are certain rules that even the fae have to follow, and given the way the wizards used the cup in the tournament, as a binder of contracts, there's no way they can un do it Much as they would like to.  Thanks, I'm so glad you liked it! BTW I've updated my other story, Two hawks Hunting also.
Title: Cup of Wonders 11 Aug 2009 4:01 am
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear..... I must say. I am not a fan of "To be continued..." :] It was very good. I do hope this is resolved some way. At least Harry and Cedric are somewhat friendly

    Author's Response: yes, they are, I saw no reason for them not to be.  Hufflepuffs seem friendly people on the whole.  And Harry will have plenty of enemies later on without adding Cedric.  Hope you enjoy the next part and thanks for reading!
Title: Cup of Wonders 10 Aug 2009 4:33 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! I hope Phil finds out about Moody and stops him from hurting Harry. I loved Ron's reaction to Phil and also the girls. Too cool!

    Write more, I'm anxious to see what happens now.

    Yes, let Phil reveal himself to Albus, but only in private.

    Author's Response:

    Phil will try very hard to protect harry, but somethings are bound to happen to the kid considering who he is. 

    I will be writing more soon and hope you enjoy it.

    That's a good idea and thanks for your vote.

Title: Cup of Wonders 10 Aug 2009 1:27 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter!

    Loved the Goblet and the fae connection to it and all the Arthurian stuff too.

    And Harry and Sev in the potions lab was so freaking funny! I just busted out laughing.

    Hmm, I say yes. Albus will be so shocked!

    Author's Response:

    I liked that part too! LOL!

    okay Phil will be revealed . . .not sure when yet though. Thanks as always!


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