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Reviews For Return to Prince Manor
Author's Response: I'm glad for that! Phil will eventually do so and then you'll see Albus just keel over.
Author's Response: Okay, he will . . .just not sure when yet. Thanks!
You have created believable characters and this is one of my favorite story arcs in the fanfic world ! Keep it up! Vana Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hesitated on doing the sequel because I was afraid I might ruin the original story, but then so many people encouraged me to go on and I got re-inspired by them so I wrote the beginning and then it just snowballed from there. And I have plenty more things that will happen to them, both in and out of school, because this book will cover their return to the manor as well, hence the title. And lots more drama and romance too! So thanks for reading and your kind words and hope you enjoy the rest of this!
Author's Response: Aw that's too bad! I had wondered where you were! I missed you. Hope you continue to enjoy and review this one and have you seen my new series, Broken Wings? It has a different kind of Harry and Snape mentor story in it and maybe you could read it when you've got time, I'd like to know what you think of it. I'm working on the sequel, Two Hawks Hunting now.
Now. What kind of question is that? Of course Philip should reveal himself to Albus Dumbledore. It would be extremely interesting to see the man try and manipulate a one-thousand-year-old vampire. It would also create beautiful tension if he and Philip were to have an argument. If he does reveal himself, I think Karkaroff should be there; who better to indimate a Death Eater than a vampire? Besides, how would Moody react to rumors about an infamous vampire circulating around the school? I greatly enjoyed the girls' reactions to him and Ron's was especially inspiring. The poor kid must be having nightmares! The history behind the Cup was breathtaking. So well thought-out and it works with the rest of the story. You are an amazing writer Kathy and finding an agent willing to publish your novels shouldn't be too hard. I love how you write and your characters are so unique (except Philip; he's mine). ::winks:: Please update soon. Keep smiling and keep writing! Always yours, Jewels. Author's Response: I don't think Dumbles could, but he'd try, of course. And I do plan on having them meet and most likely quarrel over harry and the tournament, as well as some other things. Karkaroff would be fainting on the floor, LOL! And if Moody knew . . .who knows what he might do. I think it's safer if her didn't, then Phil can surprise him later. oh yeah, Ron is going to have nightmares all right. Good because I wanted something different to go on and make the fae have a right to the Cup and what better right than that it belonged to them from the beginning? Thanks for your vote of confidence Jewels! You're awesome! Oh and to answer your question about Sarai, she'll be in the story during the last part of the tournament and the summer following it, you'll see what I mean when I write it. Thanks for your input and for letting me borrow Phil.
Author's Response: Thanks Donna! Phil will do so . . .but I'm not sure when. I think he might wait to see what Dumbles does first to help Harry and if the wizard doesn't react properly . . .ah then he'll see a Snape's fangs.
i'm undecided whether phil should reveal himself, well if he does, it should be with no one else watching, espescially not within eyeshot of moody or within earshot of karkaroff Author's Response: Thanks, and I have written my own original mythology series, based loosley on some Greek myths with twists and also my own original fantasy series. Oh yes, I do too! All for one and one for all! yes, i agree, revealing himself to the teachers is not the way to go and he wouldn't do that anyway. He's far too savvy. Albus will eventually know, I think, and Phil will do so in private.
trust the parkinson clan to go the cowards way out and not face what there daughter did rons comments about maxime made me giggle, so ron that was, i wonder if snape will tell harry the story behind his dislike for karkaroff just a small question what is a jack o lantern Author's Response: Yeah I wanted to write that, but Mr. Parkinson had other ideas. He just wanted to get the hell out of Dodge, so to speak. Pansy really did deserve what she got from everyone. Yes, well they're typical DE in that regard. Lucius pulled a fast one over on the Ministry too, using his money and position to make himself come up looking so innocent. *gag*. Yes, eventually Severus will be telling both boys about Karkaroff. Uh huh, that's my Ron! A jack-o-lantern is an American word for a pumpkin with a carved smiling face that is hollowed out and has a candle placed inside it. You can see them on halloween all over the place where I live in NJ. Saying a person is grinning like a jack-o-lantern means they are smiling so much their grin covers their face.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked and hope you like the next one I'm planning.
I liked the story of the how the Cup was lost to the Fae; it was well told. And I also liked Katie and Hermione's reaction to Phil--as well as the boys' reaction to their reaction. And Poor Ron! That was a breat scene. Bravo! And keep on writing! Author's Response: I agree and that's how I think I'm going to do it. If Phil is revealed, he won't be able to protect Harry all that well and he needs to. Sev isn't stupid, he knew that Harry couldn't do it because of the Age Line and the fact that he was with his family all that week. Oh good, I was concerned it was boring, but I guess not. Yeah, Phil is very sexy, LOL! Poor Ron, he was really scared! Thanks and I shall! |
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