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Reviews For Return to Prince Manor
I wonder what Pansy is going to do...? Ahhh the suspense! Another great chapter :] Author's Response: They were very awkward, weren't they? But I think Severus handled it nicely for hs first time. Ah . . .now that will be revealed next chapter . . .and she's wicked, very wicked! Thank you!
Great as usual, and I'd love to see Severus have that "talk" with Draco. Now that would be really hilarious!!! Love this story, Too cute. Author's Response: Oh yes, he surely does! I'm sure if he could summon a portable hole, he'd just dive right into it. You would?? Good because I was planning on that the next chapter.
And the talk with Severus was very well done . . .very hilarious and I think they both learned something. I hope Phil catches Crouch soon! And boo on Pansy! Author's Response: Yay! I like them together, they're sweet. Oh yes, they did. Whether or not it was what they wanted to learn is another story.
Author's Response: Isn't it the funniest!
V. Author's Response: You're right, poor Sev's hair is going to be white or falling out by the time this is over with. But the boys are trying really hard to be good.
Author's Response: Thank you very much and here's the next chapter!
Author's Response: Wonderful and my next chapter is now up!
Author's Response: yeah it will! Like beyond awkward! Here's your cookies--Cookie Monster!
Awkward teenagers - a simple blast to read! It's also quite to watch in action. Girls can really make fools out of themselves being all giggly and flirtatious. Only guys without a brain are interested in that. Both Harry and Draco have chosen suitbale female friends to court. Your writing style is unique and you see to have no trouble, whatsoever, writing awkward or tragic scenes. I can write tragedy very easily; romance isn't too hard for me and awkward I have trouble with but not as much as I do humor or happy-go-lucky. I'm rambling. Point is, don't stop writing, you're doing a magnificent job! Keep smiling and keep writing - no matter what anyone says. And if they do say something ... threaten 'em with a vampire. Always yours, Jewels. Author's Response: Phil's in the next chapter! Really! I agree, both of the boys have chosen well and they know it. Now they just have to convince the girls. Thanks so much Jewels, I won;t and I hope you like the next chapter I posted. Okay, I'll keep that in mind. Phil is scary when he's mad!
Author's Response: me too and check out the new one for more romance plus Sev's talk with Harry about safe sex. |
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