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Reviews For Two Hawks Hunting
Title: Foreboding 23 May 2009 7:03 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I am glad you already started this sequel. I missed the two hawks! I am horribly curious about what is awaiting for them in the Riddle house.
    Mila

    Author's Response:

    Me too! Your curiosity can be satisfied now since the next part's up!

Title: Foreboding 23 May 2009 3:34 pm
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thanks for starting the sequel so soon. I really like your Hedwig, she is so motherly :-)

    Author's Response: She is that and both Sev & Harry need her that way!
Title: Foreboding 23 May 2009 5:05 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start here, I loved how snarky/nice Snape was and how harry still has nightmares about Voldy. I hope they can locate the Horcrux and not get harmed by it!

    Author's Response: Well, you can find out next! Thank you! Yes, severus was both sarcastic an dsympathetic, funny how he can pull that off!
Title: Foreboding 23 May 2009 4:39 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant start, I'm so happy you posted the sequel. it looks to be as good as the first, if not better. Loved Hedwig here and Sev and Harry too!

    Author's Response: Thanks so glad you're reading this one too!
Title: Foreboding 23 May 2009 3:01 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    I knew I'd enjoy the fact that Hedwig was along on this quest. She can be nearly as snide as Sev--just a bit softer edge to it, but just as effective.

    That dream was a bit on the creapy side--Was it real or not? I could see it going either way--since our boy was so tired he was practially sleeping while eating dinner-let alone thinking clearly when he went to "bed".

    I'm glad to see this started--and it is a great start.

    V.

    Author's Response:

    Can she ever!

    Well, you'll find out about that later.  That's true, sometimes when we;re tired and on edge we dream weird things. Or it could be a premonition.

    Thanks and hope you like the next part.

Title: Foreboding 23 May 2009 1:04 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Are you kidding girl? You actually wrote ANOTHER sequel in the space of a couple of days, and you're worried that we won't understand if you don't update as quickly as usual. I think that even writing two stories alternately, you'll still be faster than I've been lately with updates. How the heck do you write so fast girl!~

    This first chapter has got me excited. I just can't wait for the next update to see what scary and exciting adventures await our boys.

    I don't know which story I'm more excited about. I'm happy that you've finally given us our sequel of "Heir", but I think that there is something about THIS story that keeps me intrigued. Hmm...I guess that you'll just have to keep the updates coming for both of them, so I don't have to decide!

    Oh, and I'm hoping that you'll continue also with the "Hide yourself away" series as well, because you've left us hanging with that last chapter, and I'm anxious to see what adventures await little Mia and Aria (is that her name?) Sorry it's been awhile!

    Author's Response:

    Umm . . .I don;t know I just do. :)

    yes, there's a lot going on here and this one might be a bit more intense than Heir for a bit.  I'll try and do that, LOL!

    Yes, i will be continuing with that as soon as I've done some more research, yes Mia is Harry's little cousin and Aria is Lupin's niece and Harry's love interest.

Title: Foreboding 23 May 2009 1:03 am
Reviewer: jvalread (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah! I got the story alert and your email! Thank you!
    Great start...that was a really creepy dream though..and I don;t think it was nothing that Harry was feeling.

    Author's Response:

    Oh good glad they worked!

    No, that dream was weird and scary and you'll see what it means later.

Title: Foreboding 23 May 2009 12:39 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    YAY! You updated--I'm so happy! Lol, I like how grouchy Sev was when Harry woke him up! That's just what I would have expected from him. Man, it looks like they're going to be sleeping on the ground for a long time. I like how you've added magical elements to their camping trip and am very excited to see what happens at Riddle Manor!

    Great start!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: They are, especially when they have to figure out where the other Horcruxes are.  Severus can be a grouchy curmudgeon all right.  I'm glad you liked the magic parts I figured why not use magic if you've got it to make life easier.  I certainly would! Riddle Manor has now been posted.
Title: Foreboding 23 May 2009 12:20 am
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Cool, I get to be the first to review your sequel! A very promising start! I can imagine how Harry felt after the nightmare/vision! Forests and the utdoors itself can be quite scary even without a madman haunting you. Everyrhing tends to develope strange shadows and every sound feels like someone coming. It's kind of a nice scare when you are just outside camping for fun, but for Harry in his situation it must have been quite a struggle to fall asleep again!
    I'm looking forward to your version of the Horcrux-hunt - I enjoyed the first part greatly! Thank you for sharing!

    Author's Response:

    It can as I've been on many a camping trip when i was a child and half the fun was scaring yourself silly with what might be out there.

    Yes, harry;s situation is different and he did have a problem falling asleep again.  Not just becaus eof the nightmares but because he was embarrassed too.

    You're welocme and the next part's up now!

Title: Foreboding 23 May 2009 12:14 am
Reviewer: dawna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You rock. Not one, but two great stories being written simultaneously. Thank you. I cannot wait to find out what happens to the Dursleys.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! *blushes*

    the next chapter's up so see what Dumbledore does to them.


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