| Title: Restless Spirits and Retribution
| 04 Mar 2015 9:17 pm
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| Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed)
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Great chapter! Severus and Harry dealing with the ring and Dumbledore dealing with the Dursleys. Lovely punishment...
--his
I do so love reading stories that have Dursley punishment in them. So creative!
Cool! I loved the ghosts, and hope they'll be freed when Voldy dies. I also like how you showed Dumbledore here as a person and not just the all powerful wizard. Loved what he did to the Dursleys, they so deserve it.
Author's Response: That's a possibility. Yes my goal is to make Dumbledore into a human being and not just the great wizard. They do and you'll see how it affects them later on.
| Title: Restless Spirits and Retribution
| 11 Jun 2009 9:24 am
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| Reviewer: Fairner (Signed)
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LOL Dumbledore and his "Toodles!" XD I can imagine it! and he does that hand finger wave thing while saying it.
Author's Response: Oh yes, that's exactly right. Craxy old man, LOL!
Hehe..Dumbledore's rainbow socks made me smile. the scene with the ghosts was interesting, as was the scene with the Dursleys! Payback is sweet, though I can't help but wonder what you did to them! I suppose we will find out eventually! I can't wait for more!
~Frosty
Author's Response: Well, you'll find out what happened after the spells were put on. Thanks for reading and hope you enjoy the rest! You can bookmark this if you want to get the alerts when I post a new chapter.
| Title: Restless Spirits and Retribution
| 30 May 2009 8:35 am
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Well well well, for once Albus has given in to his urges to use magic. Purrrrrfect ^.^
Author's Response: Yes, he has, finally! And look at the good he did! Thanks for reading!
| Title: Restless Spirits and Retribution
| 29 May 2009 4:13 am
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| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed)
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cheers dumbles for his ingenious spell, he has sort of redeemed himself. well done sev, harry and the riddles for dealing with the horcrux, i hope when the horcruxes are destroyed they will find some peace somewhere
Author's Response: Yes, even Albus has his moments. That is what everyone is aiming for, but whether or not it will happen . . .
| Title: Restless Spirits and Retribution
| 29 May 2009 3:49 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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OK, I like the creativity that dumbledore played on the dursleys, remembering, but they still need to suffer MORE.... please, can they truely suffer, if not for 3 years, 33 years, or till the day they die. Maybe the dreams can cause vernon and petunia to kill themselves. Dudley can live, he is a child. Really glad they are one horcrux down.. Can't wait for next post.
Author's Response: You never know what may happen as a result of that spell. They could end up totally bonkers or die of heart failure. One horcrux down and four to go, but they won't all be that easy to vanquish.
| Title: Restless Spirits and Retribution
| 26 May 2009 11:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Quynce (Signed)
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I liked this chapter-- a little bit of reflection, humor, and retribution. The punishment wasn't unique, but I'm glad that the author stayed within humane parameters (especially since D. is doing the hexing). Some authors get quite gruesome with the revenge scenarios-- this story has a bit more realism than melodrama, so the simpler punishments fit better.
Author's Response: Thanks! Dumbledore isn't the type to go in for gruesome anything, he's a moderate type of guy, who likes to go for rehabilitation rather than revenge. In this case he wishes for the Dursleys to learn from their mistakes and hopefully repent of them. So he won't do anything truly harmful to them.
| Title: Restless Spirits and Retribution
| 26 May 2009 10:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Yes, the Dursleys finally got what was coming to them! I'm so glad! Couldn;t happen to nicer folks!
And I also liked how Severus smacked Harry's hand during the Horcrux retrieval, that was so typically Snape! Great work please update soon!
Author's Response: I quite agree! yeah, Severus figured he needed a sharp reminder to look before he leaped. Thanks, i should have the next one up in a few days.
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