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Title: A Riddle Wrapped In A Conundrum 22 Jul 2015 2:38 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    One misstep, literally, can kill you and others... Come-on Harry, think! lol.

    Sorry it's been a hectic stressful couple of months since I last read this. 3 Heart surgeries, 5 deaths and lots of everyday normal stress... -sigh- I can only pray that we are done with that for a while. lol.

    --his
Title: A Riddle Wrapped In A Conundrum 23 Oct 2009 10:54 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! What a chapter! That hellhound scared me to pieces! I was so glad that Harry and Sev killed it. And I feel bad for Severus remembering those kids that got burned to death. His life as a spy was so hard.

    Author's Response: Yeah a hellhound is scary.  Yes that's going to be a really sticky point for Severus and nobody knows just how hard that life has been until harry.
Title: A Riddle Wrapped In A Conundrum 11 Jun 2009 6:46 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    The strangest thing after reading the last chapter, someone in a game i was playing said toodles to me....

    this chapter was a rush when i read it =) i thought it was a person or something living in hear when i read the word match, never thought of a hellhound. that was a big surprise!

    Author's Response:

    That's really funny!

    Yeah, that hellhound was scary, wasn't it?

    It surprised Harry and Severus too!

Title: A Riddle Wrapped In A Conundrum 03 Jun 2009 3:28 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Good grief, how can they sleep in there? I think I'd be uber freaked out, especially because there might still be other traps just waiting to be found (I'm a bit worried about the bathroom, as no one has been in there yet).

    I did really enjoy the wards going off though. Your writing was very fast-paced and the image of the two birds flying down the chimney was really cool! Poor Severus got burnt though--something tells me this is only the first of many injuries for our heroes.

    Great job!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    No the bathroom's pretty safe and Severus is kind of afraid to leave because if he does he might have to take down all those blasted concealment charms again.  So they'll stay.

    I wasn't intending to write that, but as I was writing the scene about the fire, that image just popped into my head and I was like . . .yeah that'll work really well . . .

    Yes, it is, there will be plenty more injuries for both of them, poor things. 

    Thanks and hope you enjoy the next part!

Title: A Riddle Wrapped In A Conundrum 02 Jun 2009 9:41 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    well mouldywarts is getting very creative in shielding his thingymajigs, i can't say the word incase the dark lord is watching and blows up my computer.

    i hope sev can solve the book before harry goes completely insane

    Author's Response: Yes that's for sure.  Gotta watch him, he's a wicked thing and always looking for ways to destroy Harry's supporters. I'll tell Sev to charm your computer so he can't blow it up. :) He put one on mine after the first story in this series. 
Title: A Riddle Wrapped In A Conundrum 02 Jun 2009 4:46 am
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    SQUEEE! an update :]
    Te amo!
    Poor Severus and his spying experinces. *huggles Sev'rus plushie*

    Author's Response:

    Isn't that so sad?

    Sev's experiences as a spy really suck.

    He thanks you for the hug.

    And I've a new update for you too! Be the first to review it! :)

Title: A Riddle Wrapped In A Conundrum 01 Jun 2009 9:08 pm
Reviewer: Quynce (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the hellhound-- particularly the detail about fiery spittle.

    Author's Response: Thanks, the hellhound was quite an evil critter, and I figured it would make sense about it's spit burning holes in the floor, since it's really a demon in dog shape.
Title: A Riddle Wrapped In A Conundrum 01 Jun 2009 7:36 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoop! Seems I was lucky and able to read this after all :D Harry ad Sev sure are having one heck of an adventures; ghosts, hellhounds and curses galore, eh? Luckily they have each other to aid in this mission.

    Poor Sev, his memory was absolutely horrifying. I could never recover from witnessing what Voldemort did to those children.. It’s unspeakable! Glad Harry was there for him to talk to, it’s good to share your grief so others can help you heal :)

    Author's Response:

    Yay! I'm very happy you were! Yes, and it's just going to get worse.

    Voldy was a nasty piece of work.

    It was and that's part of why Sev is such a mess emotionally.  All those awful things he saw and was forced to endure as Voldemort's follower.  yes, harry will be there for him just like Sev was for Harry.  And that's good for both of them. 

Title: A Riddle Wrapped In A Conundrum 01 Jun 2009 5:31 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. Nice.

    Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you're enjoying!
Title: A Riddle Wrapped In A Conundrum 31 May 2009 1:37 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I loved the way they fought the hellhound and all. What a great action scene. I'd love for this to be a movie! I would just be glued to the screen!

    Can't wait for the next post!

    Author's Response:

    Wow! Thanks, but I;d have to get JKR's permission first!

    But ti would be really cool.


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