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Title: A Riddle Wrapped In A Conundrum 31 May 2009 12:38 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh God, I was petrified! That scene inside the house with the dog and the fire scared me so bad! I'm so glad they're okay!

    Poor Sev, though. I hate Voldemort!

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, that part was really scary!

    Severus has a lot of nightmares to work through as his legacy of being a spy. I hate Voldy too!

Title: A Riddle Wrapped In A Conundrum 30 May 2009 6:46 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, I am sorry for the hellhound. Poor thing. And the four Muggle kids. This was a really sad chapter. Mila

    Author's Response:

    You're sorry for the HELLHOUND! Uh . . it's really NOT a nice creature . . it's a demon in dog form and if it could have, it would have cheerfully eaten Sev and Harry.

    And the four kids, oh yes, I felt soo bad for them too, they deserved none of that. 

Title: A Riddle Wrapped In A Conundrum 30 May 2009 5:33 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow! That was really really scary. The fire just about freaked me out. I thought that our boys were toast (get it?) Hee hee

    That was I think the best chapter yet, and I said that about the last one! Scary hound, demon thingy! Yikes!

    Oh and I loved Harry's comment "Thingamagingy" Funny!

    Phew, you amaze me girl. I'm just scratching my head, trying to figure out how you write so fast and come up with these amazing actions scenes.

    Do you EVER suffer from writer's block, or are you just immune?

    Okay speedy, so I'm really looking forward to the next update, which I know with you will be in lightening speed! :)

    Author's Response:

    The fire freaked me out too, I'm actually very scared of fire, since my sister nearly had her house burn down one time from one.  And I was in it.

    hellhounds are always scary, LOL!

    Harry does have some funny lines in this. 

    So, what kind of scene do you think I write best--action, drama, romance, angst, I'm curious because I don;t know myself. It's kind of hard to analyze yourself.

    Oh sometimes I do, but for some reason I am chock full of ideas for these stories. 

    Great I should have it up soon and just so you know . . .Harry is going to do something stupid.

Title: A Riddle Wrapped In A Conundrum 30 May 2009 9:05 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Something makes me think that Harry's dreams aren't over. Wonderful beginning, btw.

    Author's Response: Thank you.  You could be right! Dreams are tricky things!
Title: A Riddle Wrapped In A Conundrum 30 May 2009 5:37 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooo! Fire! Hell-hound! A coded book! My you have had a creative bit of inspiration haven't you! I really enjoyed this chapter! Can't wait for "what's next?" Should I have a bad feeling about them sleeping in the Gaunt place?

    V.

    Author's Response: Thanks, I wanted them to have to really work to find where the Horcruxes were that they didn;t know about and to have to fight to get to some of them.  No . . .the place isn't haunted, just old and smelly.  And boring!

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