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Title: Stormy Weather 22 Jul 2015 5:15 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    Work on his wandless with the first year books... puts him to work and he learns something of importance.

    --his
Title: Stormy Weather 08 Jun 2011 7:21 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    you know, Harry could just get a cold that turns into something 'cause he hid it...

    Author's Response: Actually, Harry does develop a cold later on, when they finally reach France.
Title: Stormy Weather 23 Oct 2009 11:00 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a really stupid thing to do! Typical boy. I think Severus will ground him and make him clean the house. Love this story!

    Author's Response: Yes and that's a good punishment1 Thanks!
Title: Stormy Weather 12 Jun 2009 12:17 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    lol more dumb ideas harry =)
    and severus is a genius!
    next part? erg harry gets to write whole paragraph of lines and an essay of why birds don't fly in stormy weather?
    i guess i'll find out soon enough.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, Harry just wasn;t thinking here.

    Severus is a genius of course!

    Hmm . . .you'll see soon enough! Thanks for the ideas!

Title: Stormy Weather 04 Jun 2009 12:11 am
Reviewer: le skrewt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ha - maybe Harry will try to pass it off as "reconnaissance"?

    I think you have a typo, toward the end you have the word "rooftree" - should be "rooftop", perhaps?

    glad to see more snape/harry mentoring in the last couple chappies!

    Author's Response:

    he could do that, but I doubt Sev would buy it. 

    Actually the word rooftree is correct, since I'm referring to the beam that runs along the top of the peak of the roof, which is called a rooftree.  I'm a contractor's daughter and occasionally remember what my dad used to say about building houses.

    You'll be getting a lot more mentoring in the next chapter so please read on!

Title: Stormy Weather 03 Jun 2009 4:00 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Harry, when are you going to learn impulse control? Honestly! I'm just glad he didn't get hurt. Sev needs to do something to ensure that Harry doesn't leave again. Also, I think Harry should have to clean the house. If he's cleaning, he could perhaps also stumble upon interesting objects, perhaps even what they are looking for?

    I look forward to reading more!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, that's Harry's bane.  Like Sev and his temper, it's going to take awhile for him to get it under wraps. 

    Cleanign the house is good . .. I should be posting the next chapter tonight so you can see what happens.

    Thanks for all your reviews and everything! :D

Title: Stormy Weather 03 Jun 2009 3:33 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh well, it seems to be working okay now.

    Well, I know that I already reviewed over at ffnet, but I wanted to reiterate that how can you not have a story about Harry, without him getting into trouble!! That would be like a pig not oinking, a cat not meowing, Snape not scowling!!

    I hate a too perfect Harry, and I love a scowling Snape, so bring it on! Punishment, well, I'd say an essay or lines, or something to make Harry think about the consequences of his actions, and not to be so reckless.

    Author's Response:

    Yay!

    Thanks Pandora, for giving me encouragement and I was wondering the same thing myself after I got that review.  Harry is fun because he's not perfect and he does get into trouble.  Otherwise nothing interesting would ever happen to him and Sev would be bored without anything to lecture him about.  And we don't want that, do we?

    Thanks for the ideas, I should be posting the new chapter tonight!

Title: Stormy Weather 03 Jun 2009 3:29 am
Reviewer: Ashmeadowphoenix (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hmm...I'm not sure. Maybe an essay for the disobediance but the core of this issue seems to be claustrophobia. I hope Severus has techniques to help Harry deal with that, since this adventure will probably will probably make them both confront all their fears.

    And Hedwig can't be too mad, since she told him it wasn't that bad, hehehe
    Great chapter!!!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, it will and he'll help him as much as he can, but it'll be hard to deal with that out in the open. 

    Thanks for the idea and Hedwig might be mad, since she didn;t expect Harry to act on her words. 

Title: Stormy Weather 03 Jun 2009 3:27 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I think Sev needs to punish harry, but how? harry acted like an irresponsible child, so treat him as such, whatever you decide to write, harry needs to learn to listen and be careful of himself.

    Author's Response: He does and he will have learned better by the end of this book and the chapter . . .hopefully!
Title: Stormy Weather 03 Jun 2009 2:48 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh-oh spaghetti o's! lol. Harry, you know better then to disobey Sev, now you'll have to face the music.

    Hmmm, ideas for punishment? I'd say go through with Sev's earlier threat! Make the poor sap sit in a corner and write an essay. AND… not allow Harry out of his sight for a few days, the horror!

    *avoids looking Harry in the eye* What? A girl can't be creatively devious every once in a while?

    Author's Response:

    Yeah now that WOULD be horrible!  Thanks for the ideas!

    harry isn't going to be very happy with either of us, I'm afraid!

    I'll be posting the next chappie soon so look for it.  And don;t forget to check out the awesome banner for this one!


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