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Title: Stormy Weather 03 Jun 2009 12:55 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    If I was Sev I think I'd be tempted to cast a bindus and silencio on Harry and stuff him headfirst into his sleeping bag. Actually, once Hedwig finds out what Harry did, he might be in more trouble with her than with Sev. In either case he's going to be one sorry animagus.

    This is just as great as Broken Wings and I'm so glad that you are writing this sequel. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and the one after that and the one after and... well, you get the idea.

    Bravo!

    Dancingkatz

    Author's Response:

    ha, that's pretty funny!

    That's true, Hedwig will have plenty to say once she finds out. 

    Harry's going to regret this ine way or another.

    I'm so glad you're enjoying this as much as the previous one.  I posted this on ff.net and got a review from someone who said they didn;t think this one was as good as the other one because Severus was scolding and punishing Harry too much and it was becoming predictable.

Title: Stormy Weather 02 Jun 2009 11:48 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    punishments for harry, i can be fairly creative

    1 scrub the whole house from top to bottom with a bucket of water and a tooth brush

    2 not talk to anyone for three hours

    3 make harry write assignments about every potion he has ever made, use the textbooks harry found in the attic

    4 reviewer runs away very fast from harry

    can't review anymore as harry is trying to kill reviewer

    Author's Response:

    Wow those are some punishments.

     

    Run away really fast, because I don't think Harry is in a forgiving mood.

Title: Stormy Weather 02 Jun 2009 11:44 pm
Reviewer: cammy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Busted !!! Poor Harry - he'll wish he stayed inside after Sev is through with him... Please update soon - I am sooo addicted to your writing and it always makes my day when you've posted a new chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! You're awesome for saying so!
Title: Stormy Weather 02 Jun 2009 10:03 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    *snickers quietly* Have Harry catch a cold? Naw, just pulling your leg. Good chapter, by the way. Don't have Sev hurt him too much.

    Author's Response: Okay, he won't.  And Harry could catch a cold by flying in the rain.
Title: Stormy Weather 02 Jun 2009 9:54 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooooo big trouble. Big, big trouble. Any chance Snape brought those jesses that Harry hates so much? If he can't be trusted to stay still for very long...

    Author's Response:

    oo now that's a wicked punishment.

    But I think Sev left the jesses at home.

    Still he could always conjure up a set . .. thanks!

Title: Stormy Weather 02 Jun 2009 9:45 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Once again, the Potter recklessness wins out!

    Harry, Harry what WERE you thinking? Or NOT thinking, rather.

    Now look what trouble you've gotten into.

    Severus and he need to have a long discussion about this and maybe Sev should ground him once the quest is done.

    Author's Response: Good ideas and yes, that Potter gene sure is strong!
Title: Stormy Weather 02 Jun 2009 8:10 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh boy, now he's in real trouble!

    What should Severus do?

    Perhaps give him a stern talking to and maybe have him scrub the floor of the house, top and bottom? Or clean out the fireplace?

    Great job and I hope you come up with something!

    Author's Response: Yes he sure is! Thanks for your ideas, and I should come up with something soon.
Title: Stormy Weather 02 Jun 2009 6:57 pm
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh! Poor Harry! He's not very patient, is he? Well, I don't suppose I would be either.
    SQUEE! Thank you for the update:]

    Author's Response:

    No, patience is not one of Harry's virtues. 

    Especially not when stuck inside a two by four shack.

    Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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