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Reviews For Two Hawks Hunting
This is just as great as Broken Wings and I'm so glad that you are writing this sequel. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and the one after that and the one after and... well, you get the idea. Bravo! Dancingkatz Author's Response: ha, that's pretty funny! That's true, Hedwig will have plenty to say once she finds out. Harry's going to regret this ine way or another. I'm so glad you're enjoying this as much as the previous one. I posted this on ff.net and got a review from someone who said they didn;t think this one was as good as the other one because Severus was scolding and punishing Harry too much and it was becoming predictable.
1 scrub the whole house from top to bottom with a bucket of water and a tooth brush 2 not talk to anyone for three hours 3 make harry write assignments about every potion he has ever made, use the textbooks harry found in the attic 4 reviewer runs away very fast from harry can't review anymore as harry is trying to kill reviewer Author's Response: Wow those are some punishments.
Run away really fast, because I don't think Harry is in a forgiving mood.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! You're awesome for saying so!
Author's Response: Okay, he won't. And Harry could catch a cold by flying in the rain.
Author's Response: oo now that's a wicked punishment. But I think Sev left the jesses at home. Still he could always conjure up a set . .. thanks!
Harry, Harry what WERE you thinking? Or NOT thinking, rather. Now look what trouble you've gotten into. Severus and he need to have a long discussion about this and maybe Sev should ground him once the quest is done. Author's Response: Good ideas and yes, that Potter gene sure is strong!
What should Severus do? Perhaps give him a stern talking to and maybe have him scrub the floor of the house, top and bottom? Or clean out the fireplace? Great job and I hope you come up with something! Author's Response: Yes he sure is! Thanks for your ideas, and I should come up with something soon.
SQUEE! Thank you for the update:] Author's Response: No, patience is not one of Harry's virtues. Especially not when stuck inside a two by four shack. Thanks for reading and reviewing! |
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