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Reviews For Two Hawks Hunting
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Author's Response: Ha! he sure will! Thanks for reading!
The story is wonderful so far. I loved Harry's punishment, but do not like that Severus is putting off treatment for Harry's Clausterphobia until after Voldy is taken care of. If he truely cared about his ward, then his ward's well being would ALWAYS come first. That doesn't seem to be the case here. Also, at first you have it that Severus has to be in Hawk form to understand Hedwig, then half way through the chapter you switched over to him understand her like Harry can while being human too. Just a slight plot hole. :D Author's Response: You have to add it to your favorite stories list, then you should get the alerts. At least that's what another reviewer told me. Add to Favorites and you'll get updates everytime I post a new chapter. Severus really has no choice at this point. Finding the Horcruxes is a race against time and the DE who are trying to resurrect the scumbag, though I haven't shown it yet, chapter nine will reveal just what the bad guys have been doing while Sev and Harry are searching and they will find out that Sev betrayed them and hunt them down and plot to gather again and do the ritual to bring Voldy back--again--from the dead. Severus cares very much for Harry, but the plain truth is that this is a covert war and Harry needs weeks with a therapist and they just don't have time to do that and THEN find the Horcruxes. Each time Voldy is resurrected, he comes back stronger than before and harder to kill, and that is not something they want to happen. Harry knows that and he can handle the claustrophobia, since it is not acute, and Sev will do his best to make sure no one puts his ward in a small space or a locked room. A lot of things have to be put on hold, including some of Severus's own problems, he needs a good therapist too, he has a lot of pent up guilt and turmoil from his days as a spy and watching all those awful things the DE did, but it all has to wait till the Horcruxes are gotten rid of. Plus working with handicaps makes the characters more human, since they have to overcome trouble from without and within. Sev actually can't truly understand her, but he gets the gist of what she means, sorry if that were unclear. I know I talk to my animals as if I understand them sometimes and I don't, that was what Severus was doing. Eventually, the longer he spends in hawk form, he will gain the ability to understand bird speech. Thanks for reviewing!
(I'll take a walk. In the RAIN?! I know a water repelling charm.) lol ah Sirius what trouble has he stirred up that Remus must rescue him from? I can only wonder. =) Author's Response: I just love Hedwig! Yeah, Severus and his quick wit, LOL! Oh, you'll see all right!
I'm happy the second Horcrux is destroyed and I loved the part with Harry looking at Severus and imagining all the girls going after him. LOL! Update soon, I want to see about Sirius and Remus. Author's Response: Yeah and I'd be one of those girls, LOL! Severus can be very clever and yes, Harry can be taught you know. I will try, don;t worry!
Author's Response: yeah and it would work too, maybe! Thanks for reading I need to catch up on my reading!
Are you ever planning on updating that one? I loved Severus and Harry's interaction in this chapter; forcing Harry to choose his punishment really added depth and thought to what he did. My parents make me do that sometimes - actually, it was our decision that if we drive while we drink it's four months without the car. It'll be a long four months... Harry truly acted like an adult nearing the center of the chapter because he was forced to think about his actions and I enjoyed that more mature side of him you so rarely portray. I would have burst out laughing at the girls tripping over their feet for Severus if I wasn't in school. (I'm on spare, no big deal) I was just about ready to shout, Oh me, pick me, ME! ::shakes:: I greatly enjoyed Harry's punishment and I think it holds more merit because he decided his own punishment. I know that the crime weighs more heavily on the mind if you decide your own punishment and you did that beautifully. Severus is still an intimidating man but you can tell that he deeply loves Harry and I'm happy that the boy realizes that. I hope you continue to update and to write your stories. You know that I will continue to read them. Jewels. Author's Response: I'm working on the third chapter of PM, but was having trouble deciding where to put an event, before or after the students from other schools arrive for the tournament. But I've finally figured it out. I'll put the event before since the other schools don't arrive till the end of October early November and there has to be SOMETHING happening between that time so . . .now that's settled, I can finish the chapter. Don't worry, I haven't forgotten about it! Yeah, it's a good idea to make kids do that sometimes and harry had matured more than he did in the books here because of his relationship with Severus and learning what he did about Sev's past in the first book. Now that doesn't mean he'll act like that ALL the time, but he'll come pretty close and he really stop and think, most times, before he does something. Sev does indeed love Harry, though he hasn't come right out and said it, he shows it, enough so even Hedwig sees it. And here in this fic as in PM Harry is very intuitive and knows that Severus loves him and only wants what's best for him. You going to update Moon Called soon?
Author's Response: And you'd be right. Lessons always stick better when you punish yourself. As for Hedwig . . .she's a riot!
Author's Response: Thanks I'm so glad you like it!
Oh, and I thought that having Harry think up his own punishment was a great idea. Imagine Severus allowing Harry that control though. He's come a long way to relinquish that control and take a chance of teaching Harry a valuable lesson. Author's Response: Wow, you know, you're right. I never looked closely at it that way before and now I can see the goshawk really does fit him. Yes, Severus is slowly truating Harry to take responsibility for himself, which is a good thing, because Harry needs someone to trust him that way. And it paid off as you can see. |
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