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Title: Slytherin's Treasure 04 Jun 2009 12:08 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I keep forgeting that Voldemort is currently dead and expect him to storm in!
    Poor Harry, between Severus and Hedwig, he gets no fun.
    Mila

    Author's Response:

    Yes, he's gone . . .unless his loyal followers try and ressurect him.

    Yeah, Harry has it so tough, LOL!

Title: Slytherin's Treasure 04 Jun 2009 7:07 am
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this series! I'm going to bookmark the homepage of this, and check back daily. LOVE IT!!!

    Author's Response: Whoo hoo! Thanks so much! You're the best!
Title: Slytherin's Treasure 04 Jun 2009 6:13 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    :-) Much fun much fun. Harry sooo deserves all that, and, moreover, now he knows that, too: a good combination, all and all. :-)

    Author's Response: Yes, he has learned something . . .finally! See, he can be taught!
Title: Slytherin's Treasure 04 Jun 2009 5:47 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    It's nice Harry’s starting to see Sev’s sternness for what it is; parental concern, rather then bullying like in the past. And now that Sev’s recognized Harry’s claustrophobia (darn those Dursleys!) they can deal with it. It does explain his reckless urgency, even if it doesn’t justify his actions.

    That Snape is sly though, making Harry think up his own punishment. Yes, Harry will be one skilled parent one day, with a guardian like him to follow! Harry’s decision sounded appropriate and thought out, and actually helped find the next horcrux too.

    Cant wait to read the next chappy and see how Sirius and Remus are doing! *squee* And BTW; lovely banner ^_^ So pretty!

    Author's Response:

    Exactly.  Severus's concern tends to express itself in that fashion, like most men that I've known.  First they get angry and yell and then they hug you and apologize.  Or forgive you or whatever.  The Dursleys really messed up Harry and someday Sev is going to have to deal with that and so will Harry. 

    Of course Sev is sly, he's a Slytherin! And that seemes to have been more effective than Snape choosing one.  Harry will be a skilled parent someday, very good at discipline and love.

    Padfoot and Moony . .. it's like the Odd Couple.  You'll see what I mean.

    And I think the banner is so awesome!

Title: Slytherin's Treasure 04 Jun 2009 4:19 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter--I really like how Severus made Harry think about his punishment. It was a good one too! I'm very pleased that he hasn't been snarky about it either.

    I also enjoyed the affection between Severus and Harry, both when Harry realizes that Severus thinks of him like a son and when Severus runs his hand through Harry's hair at the end.

    I'm excited to read more!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    No, Severus was angry but he also knows that Harry was really trying to make amends for his disobedience and sneering at him wouldn;t help. 

    That affection will continue to grow during the story.  I also loved that last part.  Severus stroking Harry's hair must be so soothing.  Wish he'd come stroke MY hair!

    More should be posted soon!

Title: Slytherin's Treasure 04 Jun 2009 2:56 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, that was such a sweet ending. Harry's really angelic when he's sleeping, isn't he? Hee hee! LOL!

    When he's awake, that's a different story. Poor Harry. I guess that he'll think twice before acting so impulsively and foolishly in the future.

    Author's Response: Yeah, he sure is! All kids are.  Oh he will, or at leats try to! And just wait till you see what goes on with Sirius and Remus.  It'll be a blast!

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