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Title: On Edge 17 Jul 2017 3:08 am
Reviewer: HermioneGirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I know that you may have written this a while ago, but I saw the comment at the end of the chapter and felt horrible. My condolences, and this is a great series.
Title: On Edge 30 Oct 2009 11:24 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, that was a cute chapter. I liked seeing Sirius and Remus again and hope Siri gets better soon! And I like how Dora and Moony are getting on.

    Author's Response: Thanks and you'll see them all later on.
Title: On Edge 20 Jun 2009 11:34 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm...so, when Remus and Tonks were talking about Greyback, could that possibly be foreshadowing for our two heroes? Will they encounter him?

    I did enjoy Padfoot's little romp through the park--cute!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    They might . . .I can't give that away just yet, but if you read my latest post, you'll get a kind of answer.

    I love watching dogs play! So cute!

Title: On Edge 18 Jun 2009 11:21 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    "Girls dig guys with dogs, buddy. This could be a golden opportunity for you, Moony."

    I laughed when I read that =)
    lol Sirius will be Siri =)
    Circus indeed!

    Author's Response:

    Yes he sure will!

    And it's true, I will go over to a man with a dog just so I can pet the dog and then I'll talk to the guy.

     

Title: On Edge 14 Jun 2009 8:48 pm
Reviewer: Ginny Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahhh... Now way! Well good luck for daisy in the afterlife. But I love this! See positive from me! i love this series!

    Author's Response: Yes, she should be a good candidate for the heavenly choir or whatever.  Thanks, it really helps and I've updated again!
Title: On Edge 14 Jun 2009 6:02 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww I loved it! Remus and Sirius make me laugh. I think you did a great job here and I hope to see more of Lupin and Tonks together.

    My condolences as well.

    Author's Response: Thank you I shall probably have more of them in the next chapter or two.  Those two always made me laugh. 
Title: On Edge 14 Jun 2009 2:43 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, what a sweet and funny chapter! I hope Sirius gets better soon!

    And I'm sorry about your loss, my prayers go with you!

    Author's Response:

    He will eventually!

    Thanks, I appreciate it!

Title: On Edge 13 Jun 2009 7:04 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Sirius can’t resist showing off for the kids ;) I'm quite happy with how he’s doing; sounds like his old friendly self! Soon he'll be fully mended without worry, and Harry will be quite proud of him :). Though, he'll have to stop sneaking around Remus first, hehe.

    The Remus/Dora interaction was cute! I'm glad he's starting to takes moves into a relationship, because he deserves one and they're good for each other. Good luck to them!

    Can't wait for the next update! Wonder how the next search will go? And once gain, my sympathies about your cousin...

    Author's Response:

    No, he can't that's just how he is.  Yes, he's slowly getting better and regaining his old spark.  Harry will be proud, especially when he sees how he welcomes both of them back.  If he can get out from remus's eagle eye, that is!

    yes, i like when Remus has a nice woman to marry and fall in love with. 

    It will be more than they're expecting, a whole lot more!

    And thanks again!

Title: On Edge 13 Jun 2009 1:21 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    *hugs* I'm sorry about your cousin. It is a good chapter, btw. You never fail to impress me :).

    Author's Response: Thanks very much! For both your condolences and your kind words, i really need them right now!
Title: On Edge 12 Jun 2009 9:26 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, change of scenery. This chapter was lovely, I am glad Sirius is getting better.
    Sorry for your loss :-(
    Mila

    Author's Response: Thanks, I wanted to let everyone see how Sirius was doing and thanks for your sympathy.

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