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Reviews For Two Hawks Hunting
Title: Hawks At Play 08 Jun 2011 7:51 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I said a Fatama Prayer, Hail Holy Queen, Our Father, and a few other prayers for your cousin. I pray that she has a swift journey through purgatory.

    Author's Response: Thanks! That's very kind of you.
Title: Hawks At Play 30 Oct 2009 11:41 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved it! You described the two hawks playing and flying so good I could see it. I love Freedom and Warrior and Hedwig was funny.

    So was Freedom saying, Don't worry, Easter bunny, I'm not hungry yet.

    Great chappie!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much1 I loved writing this one.
Title: Hawks At Play 21 Jun 2009 4:07 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    "Mistress Softfeather" lol

    Author's Response: Yes, there's another of my good ones.  It's such a joy to create those names for Hedwig and Severus.
Title: Hawks At Play 21 Jun 2009 12:32 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol, I loved the humor of this chapter. I especially liked when Harry called Severus "old," "It's okay, Easter bunny, I'm not hungry just yet," and Hedwig talking about a conspiracy when she was woken up. Very nice work--a light-hearted chapter was perfect to break up all the angst.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Harry does have plenty of cheek in him, doesn't he?

    Don;t know where I came up with the easter bunny line, it just appeared in my head.

    Yeah, Hedwig can be grumpy when awakened suddenly, like most birds and Potions Masters, LOL!

Title: Hawks At Play 17 Jun 2009 8:07 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Fun on wings, woot! Once again you have given us a wonderful(and funny) chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks, it really was meant to break up the seriousness of everything, since I didn;t want it to be too grim!

    Author's Response: Thanks, it really was meant to break up the seriousness of everything, since I didn;t want it to be too grim!
Title: Hawks At Play 17 Jun 2009 5:12 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    that was a great chapter, not much excitement but sev and harry in bird form made me smile at their silly antics. harry i must congratulate for his teriffic owl scores and if the toad wasn't dead i would kill her for giving harry a D

    Author's Response: Yes, it was needed after all the angst and action of the previous ones.  Harry did wonderful and I'd kill her all over again just for you, kreacher! :D
Title: Hawks At Play 16 Jun 2009 3:30 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Great and again my sympathies.

    I loved the reference to William Blake's poem "Tyger, tyger!" it shows that Voldy was at least educated enough to manipulate classic literature for his own use. Brilliant!

    I loved how Harry and Sev played, Sev is really getting into being a good role model and guardian.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I appreciate it!

    You recognized the poem refrence!! Wow! I was sure nobodu except another English teacher or major would get that.  Great job!! You get 50 House Points!!

    He is learning and doing well at it.

Title: Hawks At Play 16 Jun 2009 3:01 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a great chapter. Severus took just the right tone with Harry regarding his grades and I loved how they flew together and it was beautifully described. I wish I had wings now!

    Hedwig was great too!

    Author's Response: Me too! I liked that part and am glad you do as well! Love Hedwig!
Title: Hawks At Play 15 Jun 2009 6:56 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Why do you DO that?

    Why do you make me fall in love with your stories, Kathy?

    Warrior and Freedom were amazing together. I truly love it when the two of them can play together as hawks and, for a while, at least, be free of a heavy burden. As always, Hedwig is simply a dream to read; I never would have thought of giving her her own personality. A unique but welcome twist!

    I am so terribly sorry about your cousin! You must miss her terribly. I love my cousins deeply and I don't know what I'd do if anything happened to them. You poor dear, you've had to deal with so much pain and sorrow! I hope you truly believe that, although she may be gone, she will always be in your heart.

    Keep smiling even through your tears. Know that you are loved and cherished and your cousin will always a remain a part of you.

    Hugs and kisses,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    Umm . . .because I'm supposed to? At least I think I am!

    yes, that was why I wrote this chapter, because they both needed to let off some steam.  I love writing her and you'll get more of her in the next chapter. 

     

    Thanks for that, Julie.  I know she is watching from up there and probably reading too!

     

    And I've updated again! 

    Hugs,

     

    Kathy

Title: Hawks At Play 14 Jun 2009 9:31 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    *likes flying!*

    Author's Response: So do I! I've updated again and you can have more flying!

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