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Reviews For Two Hawks Hunting
Title: Hawks At Play 14 Jun 2009 7:30 pm
Reviewer: Min (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nicely done.

    You have my sympathies.

    Author's Response: Thank you! You're very kind and I hope you enjoy the next chapter.
Title: Hawks At Play 14 Jun 2009 8:51 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter was fun, and those two needed some after all their work :) They sure had a blast playing and flying together, and it was good practice. The constant banter was funny too; I loved Warrior's outrage at being called old! Freedom sure knows how to push buttons, hehe.

    Can’t wait for the next trip, and to see how thins go in Transylvania!

    Author's Response:

    Yeah Warrior doesn;t like it when Freedom sasses him like that.  But then he wouldn't be Freedom if he didn't do that.

    The next part is up now! See what happens!

Title: Hawks At Play 14 Jun 2009 8:13 am
Reviewer: supergirl02 (Signed) [Report This]
    that was great! I loved every minute of it!! Can't wait for more!!

    Author's Response: Thanks and there is more posted!
Title: Hawks At Play 14 Jun 2009 6:52 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Just think Daisy is flying with the angels, that's why this chapter is so special right now, Freedom and Warrior are flying free and so is your cousin.

    Author's Response: Yes that is true thanks for your beautiful sentiments, i really appreciate them.  And now the next one has been posted.
Title: Hawks At Play 14 Jun 2009 6:40 am
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    Can't wait for the next chapter, as always!

    Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you like it, it has even more Sev, Harry, & Hedwig.
Title: Hawks At Play 14 Jun 2009 6:33 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    I like!! Much fun. I like the bits on the teenage Voldie the best. It sounds realistic - young and cocksure, like a moody teenager, but also much like voldimort. 'twas cool :-)

    Author's Response: Oh good, it's hard to imagine the Evil One as a kid, so I'm happy I did a good job on him.  He sure is creepy though.  I could see him pulling the wings off of butterflies.
Title: Hawks At Play 14 Jun 2009 6:20 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    That was so sweet. That was a wonderful thing that Severus told Harry that he was proud of him. Harry really needed to hear that. I loved also that Severus was sensitive enough to realise that Harry needed to fly to get rid of his claustrophobia.

    I'm sure that Daisy would be proud of you Snapegirl.

    Ooh, Transylvania? Vampires?

    Author's Response:

    He sure did and Severus did a great thing when he said that.  When he chooses, Severus can be both observant and understanding, and he really cares about Harry's wellbeing. 

    Thanks for that! I think she would have really liked these last two chapters.  Maybe she's reading them from heaven on an angel's laptop??

    No, no vampires in this fic, that's for RTPM.  But there is something else in the forest that's creepy.  Just wait and see.


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