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Reviews For Two Hawks Hunting
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm hungry too!
-P.G. Author's Response: yeah that part was really sad. I'm glad you like this and just wait till you see what happens now.
Harry getting sick simply added a touch of class to the chapter. A story would not be complete without a character getting sick; it's easy to relate too as well (I should know, I've been sick a LOT this year). Your idea for Lucius sounds intriguing. You don't need to ask me what I think - though I'm greatly honored that you value my opinion in such a way. The idea simply sends chills down my spine; an evil aristrocratic villain is one thing but your spin... I can't wait! I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter, my dear; it is going to be brilliant! And better yet - no one'll be expecting it! ::laughs evilly:: Don't forget to update Return to Prince Manor! I love my Philip a little too much to wait much longer. . . ::winks:: Lots of hugs from Jewels. Author's Response: They are, they're more like father and son, with Hedwig filling in occasionally as a mother/familiar role. Hedwig might eventually get up enough confidence to sing Sev a lullaby, when he's sick or something, LOL. Yes, Lucius is very creepy and he'll be even creepier still in the next chapter. Of course I value your opinion, Jewels. You are honest and give me good ideas to use. I'll be updating PM next, so don;t fret too much! *hugs back* Snapegirl
Master Grim and Stoic. Poor Harry getting sick T_T. Also the last part when Sev wouldn't tell what it was, I was guessing snails lol! Ah Sea Snails aren't bad, though I don't ever want to eat a garden snail ewww. lol Author's Response: Aren't they funny? I liked them very much! I think that one suits Severus. Yes, snails are a delicacy in France and also in Italy. Hope you enjoy the next update I just posted.
Author's Response: Thanks, but I've just posted a new one for this story! So you'll need to read that one first!
Anywho, this chapter had some cute and funny scenes! I loved it when they were all huddled during the storm; Hedwig reminded me of a mother hen, hehe. Poor Harry had some bad dreams/memories though. Vernon really should boil in his own fat, lol! Next chapter sounds like it'll be interesting. Two angry deatheaters out for blood and revenge... not a friendly combination. I’ll check out RPM’s update asap! Author's Response: Yeah, most people don't like snails. I agree about Vernon, but we all know he's suffering under that spell, right? No, and there's more than just Bella and Lucius at the meeting, as you'll see.
Author's Response: Great! I have updated again, now you can see what else has been going on while Sev & Harry are away.
I loved Hedwig's lullaby too and Severus did a great job in taking care of Harry when he was sick. The escargot line was hilarious! Author's Response: Yes and I agree too, since I used to be a teacher and the pay really was not enough. Maybe someday hedwig will sing Severus a lullaby. LOL! Glad you're enjoying this so much and I have posted again, just so you know. |
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