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Title: A Long Way Away 18 Jun 2009 9:54 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, someone art-wise should make a picture of the three birds sitting under the cliff...
    Mila

    Author's Response: Oh. now that would make such a cool picture! Wish I could draw on the computer, but I'm only good on paper.  Thanks, Mila!  I've updated again, BTW!
Title: A Long Way Away 18 Jun 2009 5:26 am
Reviewer: Alifromnm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am loving this story and RPM!!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad to hear it!
Title: A Long Way Away 18 Jun 2009 4:20 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    That was great! The interactions between Harry, Hedwig, and Sev are priceless. Loved Hedwig's lullaby and Harry when he was sick and Severus thiking about boiling the horrid Vernon in his own fat!

    I also loved the part with the escargot. I love it too!

    Author's Response: Yeah i agree, Vernon deserves that big time. Oh good, I love it too! It's very tasty.
Title: A Long Way Away 17 Jun 2009 8:33 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Heh, I look foward to the next chapter. Have you ever had escargot for real? It really is very good. I can imagine how it would taste with spaghetti and shrimp. Yum. Aw, man, now I'm drooling. *glares playfully at you*

    Author's Response: Oh yes, I have it every Christmas, usually and if we go out to a restaraunt that serves it, I order it.  So am I, and I've had it that way before, it really is delicious!
Title: A Long Way Away 17 Jun 2009 6:00 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    that was great, there was a little mistake, the french use the euro now not the franc, i think only people who live in europe will only catch on to that. i have had snails and they are lovely.

    sev was great when harry was ill, i had the flu in my teens and i felt bloomin awful for a week, so i did feel for harry.

    i want some of that soup they had, its sounds really nice

    Author's Response:

    Yes they do now, but not back in 1995, when this takes place.  Me too, I really like them. 

    Oh yes, and now there's an even more dangerous flu going around, the swine flu, I heard on the radio that a kid died from it in NJ, where I come from.  Horrible!

    That chicken and wild rice soup is based upon a real soup they serve at B&N cafe where I work, it tastes heavenly and I wish they sold it to us, I'd buy ten pouches of it.

    Now I'm starving, LOL!

Title: A Long Way Away 17 Jun 2009 4:28 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw that was so sweet. I loved how Severus took care of Harry. Just like a parent. Poor Harry has never known what it's like to have someone care for him. How sad. Those pathetic Muggles. They ought to be strung up!!

    I loved the part where Hedwig cleaned Harry and then sung a lullaby to him. Too too cute. And Severus' looking shocked that Hedwig wanted to do it to him too!!! I would have loved to see that!

    Oh, RPM next. Goodie. Can't wait!!

    Author's Response:

    It is really sad and the Dursleys are so wicked for not even giving him care when he was sick . . .believe it or not there really are people like that in the world, horrible people, I encountered some of them when I worked at an abuse center for a few months and read some more case files.  Those made me sick, because they were actually true and not made up.  A lot of how I write the dastardly Dursleys are based on them . . .shivers.

    Yeah, Hedwig is very motherly towards her fledgling wizard, smiles.  Yeah, maybe Hedwig will get up the nerve to groom him someday.  Wouldn't that be hilarious???

    Coming soon, so stay tuned!

Title: A Long Way Away 17 Jun 2009 7:44 am
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh-oh. NOT good. I sense a rather large amount of danger headed directly at Snape and Harry... *gulp*
    ~Fern

    Author's Response: No, there will be a great deal of danger coming, from unecpected directions.  Thanks for reading, as always.
Title: A Long Way Away 17 Jun 2009 5:41 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Much fun. I like how Harry's bratty when he's sick. :-)

    Author's Response: Yeah, he's a trip when he's not feeling well. 

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