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Title: Sylvanor's Children 30 Jun 2013 4:17 pm
Reviewer: beth (Anonymous) [Report This]
    asdfghjkl my name was mentioned in here :) now i feel like part of the fic even more!
Title: Sylvanor's Children 08 Jun 2011 11:15 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Can you please get them out of there? It's getting dull. I hope this is AU. The Horcruxes are not where they should be.

    Author's Response: I believe I did mention in the summary of this fic that this was an AU storyline. It would never be considered canon, since Harry and Severus are allies and Animagi.  I also thought I mentioned in one of my notes that the Horcruxes were NOT the same as in the books, two especially are vastly different, one of them in this part of the story.  They are also, as should have been obvious by now, not all hidden at Hogwarts. To me that wouldn't make sense, you don't hide the pieces of your soul all in one place, it makes it too easy for someone to defeat you--and Riddle's not stupid.  What exactly do you find dull about this part? The fact that they have to ask for help from a new species of person? Sorry, but Severus and Harry aren't all knowing and they do need help on occasion.
Title: Sylvanor's Children 06 Nov 2009 11:37 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    WOW!! I love the wolfen and think they'll make great allies, specially Darkmoon and Meadowsweet! So really cool, I like them even better than the werwolves in New Moon. I think maybe Hedwig got attacked by one of those trees, the evil ones.

    I really hope so! I don't want her to die!
Title: Sylvanor's Children 19 Jul 2009 2:36 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter, gl;ad that the werewolves got chased away but they are still out there somewhere. sev and harry need all the help they can get from the wolfen, they seem a very nice pack once they had overcome there initial suspiscions, a great ally to have. the ministry should be ashamed of themselves, making them live in a forest but they seem to be doing alright. hedwig will be ok, she's a fighter that owl

    Author's Response:

    Oh yes, don;t count them out yet.  They'll be back!!

    yes they are really good allies to have in a fight or as friends.

    The Ministry is filled with dunderheads and ostriches. 

    She sure is!

Title: Sylvanor's Children 07 Jul 2009 8:06 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    poor Hedwig! I think she got attacked by Greyback....or went to the spot where the soul fragment is? I really liked the wolfen society, it sounds so cool! I hope Meadowsweet is able to save Hedwig.
    Lets face it Severus and Harry would be lost with out a motherly figure to guide them. =) haha

    Author's Response:

    That might have happened. You'll see in the next chapter.

    Very true, she is Mama Owl to them, LOL!

    Go and check out the next chapter to see what happens next.

Title: Sylvanor's Children 06 Jul 2009 12:00 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    *squawks indignantly* I can't say anything about the cliffie, since I've done so myself. But don't you kill Hedwig. I liked the wolfen society(sort of reminded me of ElfQuest), and I eagerly await the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    That's true!Yes, the wolfen are sort of based on Elfquest, I loved that series, and LOTR and some of the practices of the Lakota and Iroquois.

    Next chapter's up by the way!

Title: Sylvanor's Children 04 Jul 2009 11:28 am
Reviewer: Ginny Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    No!I don't want Hedwig to die... But the wolfen were cool. They remind me of the werewolves in Twilight. Except that in Twilight when they're really angry they change aswell. I think Hedwig will survive but will be blind in one eye. But please don't use that idea. It just makes sense.

    Author's Response:

    Okay, I won;t kill her and she won;t be blind in one eye.  Promise.

    They are similar but different as well. 

    You can learn some more about them in my latest update that I've just posted. Thanks for R &R ing.

Title: Sylvanor's Children 03 Jul 2009 3:27 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    The Ministry needs their heads examined. Throwing away children is a crime.

    I think the wolfen are great though Vlad could cause trouble. Hope he gets it thru his stubborn head that Harry and Severus are FRIENDS and not enemies.

    Poor Hedwig. Fix her Meadowsweet!

    Author's Response:

    It is and they sure do.

    he will eventually.

    Okay, she'll be working on it!

Title: Sylvanor's Children 03 Jul 2009 2:58 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant! The wolfen are very interesting and I love how you described their homes. I hope that Meadowsweet can save Hedwig, the poor owl! I think she might've been the victim of a curse.

    Author's Response: Thanks. I liked making them part of my story and am eager to know how everyone likes them. Meadowsweet will try and you could be right.  I have just updated.
Title: Sylvanor's Children 01 Jul 2009 9:37 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, that was a powerful chapter. I must admit, that I'm very intrigued by the Wolvens' home among the trees! How fascinating.

    There story is really heartbreaking. Imagine abandoning young children, and leaving them to fend for themselves.

    Author's Response: They really have a good society, considering what they were left to accomplish on their own.  The Ministry officials really screwed this one up and someday it'll come back and bite them in the butt. 

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