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Title: Sylvanor's Children 01 Jul 2009 5:12 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    That bastard Grey back hurt Hegwig! Boy is he in for it now!

    If I'm wrong, maybe she tried to rest in the trees holding the horcrux?

    I love the way you're going with the wolfen, great chappie!

    Donna :)

    Author's Response:

    Good guesses, but I can;t tell you which is right.  Don't want to spoil the next chapter! :D

    You'll be seeing a lot more of the wolfen, 'specially Darkmoon, in upcoming chapters!

Title: Sylvanor's Children 01 Jul 2009 4:58 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, no!! Poor Hedwig!! I dunno what happened to her eyes.

    I like the world you've created, here. It reminds me of Robin Hood and his band of Merry Men, sort of, though Vlad is clearly trouble. I also like the sort of 'organic' magic they have, without the weird spells and stuff. :-)

    Author's Response:

    Something that is bad, as you'll see.

    That's true, I kind of had them in mind when I wrote this.  Remember Robin Hood Prince of Thieves? They lived in trees too. 

    Vlad is trouble, though he won't betray them to the werewolves.

    yes, they have natural magic, and it is stronger than the kind  most wizards have. 

Title: Sylvanor's Children 01 Jul 2009 1:52 am
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Of course she will.

    Well, well, well. Lots and lots of angst and tension! Kathy, I do not know how you manage to continue impressing me but you do. The interaction between Harry and your original characters is believable and a delight to read. I've simply fallen in love with Meadowsweet! Darkmoon is impressive as well as intimidating - I wouldn't want to meet him in a dark alley.

    I loved your descriptions and the beautiful community you created. It sounded so real, I wanted to reach out and touch it! Ah well... I can dream.

    Keep smiling and keep writing!

    And I owe you for the snippet up top. ;-)

    Hugs,

    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, that's what makes it interesting. 

    Meadowsweet is one of my favorites too.  Darkmoon is very alpha, but he can also be kind and gentle if need be. 

    I'd like to live in it.  Wouldn't you?

    Thanks and I will try! Keep reading, okay? :)

Title: Sylvanor's Children 01 Jul 2009 12:37 am
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    See, I COULD take a guess at what happened to Hedwig, but I have no idea, so it would be pointless. I like the wolfen society. They seem to be rather pack oriented, like I thought they might be. I'd like for Harry to croon a lullaby to Hedwig. It would be terribly sweet for him to do that.

    Author's Response:

    Okay, it'll be explained next chapter.

    great.  They are quite pack orientated, as makes sense for those of their dual nature.

    Aww, now that really would be cute!


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