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Title: That Which Is Hidden 12 Aug 2017 4:32 am
Reviewer: HermioneGirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I like this story so far. I really want Meadowsweet and Harry to get together!
Title: That Which Is Hidden 15 Feb 2010 8:54 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    This was wonderful, and I absolutely LOVE Darkmoon. I like how he uses the Marine's code.
Title: That Which Is Hidden 07 Nov 2009 2:52 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter! Those trees were really scary1 I loved how you have differentHorcruxes and I really love Darkmoon. I think I've said that before, LOL!
Title: That Which Is Hidden 27 Jul 2009 12:05 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    0.0 oh crud what horrid trees definitely a million times worse than the whomping willow since they can talk...

    Author's Response:

    Yes and there are more of them, so they can hurt you all at once! I'd be petrified.

Title: That Which Is Hidden 20 Jul 2009 2:57 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like Darkmoon! He's good for Harry and seems like he'd fit right in with them.

    The battle for the staff was awesome, reminded me of LOTR with the Ents vs Saruman somewhat. Hope Darkmoon can get help for them & destroy the staff.

    Author's Response:

    Darkmoon is very much like a young version of Sev in a way. 

    Cool I was wondering if anyone would make that connection! 50 House points to you and candy!

Title: That Which Is Hidden 20 Jul 2009 2:45 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a very tense scene with the trees, I almost thought they weren't going to make it. Lucky Darkmoon was there to help. Can't wait to read the next one.

    Author's Response: Thanks I wanted it to be different and scary!
Title: That Which Is Hidden 19 Jul 2009 3:03 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Again with the half-cliffies? Are all authors bent on evil cliffies? Even Rowling herself had made some chapters cliffies! It drives me up a wall. *was barely hanging onto a wall sconce with her tail, to show she meant that statement literally.* I don't need a luck potion, hun, you do :P. Update soon please.

    Author's Response:

    There's such thing as a half cliffie? Is it worse than a full one?

    Okay wish I had Sev brew me one.  I have just updated! Yay!

Title: That Which Is Hidden 19 Jul 2009 3:50 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    this chapter was awesome, trees that move, kind of creepy, beware in forests and woods, you never know if a tree is following your every move.

    now how many casualties do we have, sev, harry and hedwig, well i hope they al;l get well soon and find the next hor.. well i mean thingymabob

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, especially in THAT one!

    Uh yeah all three have been injured. 

    They have the next forbidden object, now Darkmoon has to help them destroy it. 

    Check out the next chapter to see what happens.

Title: That Which Is Hidden 19 Jul 2009 2:34 am
Reviewer: Caecillia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    zomg this is super intense. i love it! update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks! Here is more!
Title: That Which Is Hidden 19 Jul 2009 1:05 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    What a great chapter. Darkmoon is a good OC, I like him very much. Mila

    Author's Response: yay! A Darkmoon supporter! I think he's cool, if I do say so myself.

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