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Title: That Which Is Hidden 18 Jul 2009 9:48 pm
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder will happen to the trees now that Harry and Severus took the Staff?

    Author's Response: You'll find out if you read my next posted chapter!
Title: That Which Is Hidden 18 Jul 2009 8:09 pm
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great job! I really like the atmosphere you have created, it's authentic and the conversation between Darkmoon and Harry is also sweet. The battle and the black forest remind me of Tolkien. Very well done.

    I am eager to read the rest!

    Author's Response:

    Brilliant! More has been posted.  Glad you caught the similarities to Tolkien becuase that's what I was aiming for.

    Darkmoon and Harry will bond more in future chapters. Thanks for reading!

Title: That Which Is Hidden 18 Jul 2009 4:45 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    How is Darkmoon going to deal with two casualties? I hope that he can heal them both, and or get them to safety.

    How old are the wolfen. It's very sad that they are alone, with no one to take care of them.

    I loved what Harry did with the trees. How did he even think to do that?

    Hmm...so I get a Felix Felicis. Great, I've had a rough week at work, could use some good luck!!

    Does that mean, that you'll update soon?

    Author's Response:

    He will try his best to protect them, he is very good at it.

    They are anywhere between 15-19 years of age. yes but hopefully something can be done about it eventually.

    He just acted on instinct and logic and it worked.

    Good, because so could I!

    yes, and as a matter of fact, I have!


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