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Title: Herbology Lessons 25 Jul 2009 1:59 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! Poor Harry. How embarrassing to be reprimanded in front of the girl he's smitten with.

    That was cute the little scene at Vince's house. I love how you write family scenes. You really have a knack for making the little kids sound so adorable and the family dynamic close and comfortable.

    Aw,...Harry and Meadowsweet. I feel so bad for them that they have to part. I really hope that they can be reunited soon.

    Ooh, I'm worried about this unexpected pursuit.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, that's very embarrassing, but Severus was annoyed, he hates to be ignored while teaching, especially something this important.

    Thanks! That's probably due to my own family's influence.  I have so many little kids around and my family is loud and noisy and I think when I bring a guest home they get overwhlemed for a bit till they get used to it. 

    It's really too bad, but . . .the quest must go on and who knows . . .Harry could convince Fudge to revoke his ruling on the wolfen once he tells Fudge how Darkmoon and Meadowsweet helped them find the third Horcrux.

    You should be worried, it's not a good thing, what will happen next.

Title: Herbology Lessons 25 Jul 2009 1:40 am
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww! Both of those couples are so sweet! Such a fluffy chapter. I think we needed that one. I like how Sasha can see Harry for who he is, and not what he is. He's not an animagus, or the Boy-Who-Lived to her. Not totally. He's just... Harry, to her. And that's what Harry really needs. Someone who knows who Harry is too. Does that make any sense from my convoluted mind over here?

    Author's Response:

    We did, especially since the next one is going to be action filled and very very tense. 

    Sasha is one of the few people who can do so, the other is Severus.  And one of the reasons she can is because she is apart from the wizarding world and has experience in looking at people for who they are and not what they are.  Yes, it does make sense.  Thanks for reviewing so frequently!


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