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Reviews For Two Hawks Hunting
no evil cliffie for me! lol Author's Response: Oh yes and don't you just love it! No, lucky you!
hedwigs story was a brave one, she is a most couragouus owl, the curses harry has learned will help him with death eaters and the like but they don't seem to be helping with the inferi, good luck to sev and harrykins Author's Response: ooh, that's cruel! Now I have to leave you with another one! She is and she'll be helping harry and Severus more as they go on. Yes and they can help with the inferi if he casts them properly, as you'll see when you read the next part.
Author's Response: Thanks! I just posted the next chapter, so now you can be put out of your misery, LOL!
::pulls out gun:: I hate zombies, have I mentioned that before? ::shudders:: This was difficult to read. I enjoyed the training session with Severus and Harry; why does Dumbledore have to ruin the moment and lay more pressure upon them? The old bugger cannot take a hint, can he? And Voldemort. He was one messed up child, that's for damn sure. I'll fight him so long as he's not surrounded by the undead and Philip is by my side. Do you enjoy freaking out your readers? Zombies, zombies, zombies... I hate them, I really do. I'll take Megatron or Sauron any day of the week; anything but the undead! This once, I really don't think I want you to update quickly... Author's Response: Nope. He can't. Yes, he really was a messed up thing, always was and always will be. He needs to be taken out. I know you hate zombies, I don't like them either. Just be glad you were never forced to watch Resident Evil. Of course, it's fun! Now go and read about how Harry and Sev blast them off the face of the earth.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked my clever device, the dagger is a very sly and cunning opponent. I have, the next part is up now!
Author's Response: Guilty. Mea culpa! *holds hands up* I just posted the next one so now you can see what happens. And I'm off to review Runner since I was in the middle of a review when my Windows updated all of a sudden and I lost it.
The only thing I didn't like . . .you ended it on a cliffie! Update again, I'm waiting with bated breath! Author's Response: I have updated and am happy that my advice from Sev to Harry is correct. i salute you and all our other men and women who serve in our armed forces. Thanks for reading!
This part was so intense and I loved the way Severus reassured Harry about the battle magic and Hedwig's talk also. Your attention to detail is amazing. Author's Response: Thanks! I try hard to make the reader see, hear, and feel what the characters do. Okay, don't lose it, I've updated! |
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