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Title: Orphanage on the Hill 09 Aug 2009 11:41 pm
Reviewer: Beya (Anonymous) [Report This]
    AHHHHHH!!!! Amazing!! Thank you for sharing!!

    Author's Response: You're welcome and I have updated again, so don't worry!
Title: Orphanage on the Hill 09 Aug 2009 8:25 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    NO FAIR!!!! I hate cliffies! Wonderfully written (as ususal). You have me on the edge of my chair!!! ASAP!!!

    Author's Response:

    You do?? But they're so much FUN . . .for me that is.

    You are? Good, stay there, because there are more cliffies to come.  Just don't fall off!

Title: Orphanage on the Hill 09 Aug 2009 7:53 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Young lady!! You're cliffies are killing me. :o

    Okay, so that was very well done, the conversation about how Severus felt ill after the first time he killed someone.

    I can't imagine how Harry is going to cope when HE kills someone for the first time. Poor Harry, he is going to find it very difficult.

    OOh, those inferi are really creepy, aren't they?

    Author's Response:

    No! Don't die, Pandora! Then who wil review my stories???

    Gives a Restorative Draft.

    I wanted to write that conversation between Sev & Harry for awhile, because I felt it was important that the two of them discuss what it was like to have to kill in self-defense and how it leaves a person scarred, no matter what.  That's an important issue for any would-be soldier to learn about and Harry is like a soldier in this war, a new recruit who needs an experienced mentor to show him the ropes and reassure him that what he feels is normal.  I thought it made Sev more human and less cold to share his own experiences with Harry so he could understand the price of war.

    Oh God, the kid's going to be a mess, but Sev will help him get through it, that's what he's there for.

    yes as they are meant to be. I sure wouldn't want to see one . . .even in my dreams! *shivers*

Title: Orphanage on the Hill 09 Aug 2009 7:28 pm
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH!! AH!!! HARRY, SEV!!! Nooo! *cries* Please let them be okay! It was a good chapter too.

    Author's Response: Hurry and read the next chapter so you can find out! Thanks for reading!
Title: Orphanage on the Hill 09 Aug 2009 7:25 pm
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    must have update soon.....i love this story

    Author's Response: You're command has been noted and processed! Here is your update! :)
Title: Orphanage on the Hill 09 Aug 2009 7:04 pm
Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    To stop there is just plain MEAN!! But as it was a good long and interesting chapter I suppose you can get away with it...

    Author's Response:

    I hope so, LOL!

    Hope you like the next part!


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