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Title: Where the Dead Walk 12 Aug 2009 7:11 pm
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    Dang it Harry, really! You spilled the potion AND got nicked by the blame. How bad is your luck?? I hope Harry doesn't try to kill Severus. That would make me upset. :-(

    Author's Response: Very bad, which is running true to form in this quest.  Well, except for a few times.  You'll see what happens when I post the next chapter.  Sorry for all the cliffies, but they add to the tension, which is what I want here. 
Title: Where the Dead Walk 12 Aug 2009 5:36 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    MORE angsty? Wow, I can't imagine it being more than this one.

    Ooh, I'm really worried for Harry. That scratch did something to him, didn't it?

    Great chapter, I'm dying to know what happens next with the dagger. I hope that they make it to Hogwarts ahead of Greyback and the others. Scary, very scary.

    Oh, and you left us on a cliffie again, haven't you young lady! :)

    Author's Response:

    Oh, you have NO idea what I have planned, Pandora. 

    Something very . . .unexpected and terrible.

    I give you fair warning.

    Yes, it did and it's not going to be pretty.

    Greyback and company are horrible, but so is the dagger. I'm not sure which of them is worse.

     Yes, I have and I'm so evil.

Title: Where the Dead Walk 12 Aug 2009 5:17 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ::oh, it's mine. My own. My precious::

    You are a nasty, mean authoress, do you know that?

    ::shudders::

    Reading the beginning of the chapter was difficult but I did it. I hate dead things; I can handle werewolves and vampires but NOT zombies. The way you described them... I was ready to grab a gun, let me tell you.

    Now, I'm going to guess that the Blade has a strange hold on Harry as the One Ring did with Frodo due to the cut in the ::cough:: battle?

    Angst, I love angst.

    But first you have to update Return to Prince Manor. I want to see Philip terrorize the old codger.

    Update soon, my dear.

    ::smiles and winks::

    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    Uh huh, you've told me so several times.  Should I mind?

    So was I and I was writing it. See, i can scare myself too.  And these next chapters really terrify me.

    Ah Phil and Albus what a good scene that will be.   But I don't know just when I should have him speak to the old coot, at the beginning of the tournament or after the first task? Ah well, I'll figure it out. 

    Thanks as always.


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